Crazy Characters, Zombies, Ninjas , vidogames.

[LToEV]

The life and Times of Eric virgin is a comedy adventer about Eric virgin and his friends. It a comic of weird ways life can go wrong that im sure will make you laugh. You should check us out im sure you be happy you did. Also we would love to here from you so please leave feed back (http://www.lifeofericvirgin.smackjeeves.com)

[Robin Pierce]

Ohhh wow, please note that we have regulations on signature sizes:

PLEASE Limit the size of the sig to fit in the same area that a standard advertisement would fit plus 20 px (468px wide, 80px high). Banners must be Safe-For-Work (no nudity/gore), please follow this guideline so I don't need to disable sigs. I've noticed people starting to post excessively large (ie larger that 60 pixels high)

Please change your sig, that's really just a bit excessive!

Signed,
Your friendly neighbourhood mod.

edit: I've disabled your signature in this post, when you have a standard size one feel free to edit your original post and reenable it.

[LToEV]

My apologies its fixs

[Harishankar]

( Small note to all comic artists pitching their work: Please, please, please do take a look at other people's comics and critique them as well. That's the only way to keep this forum going. I find that most people are only interested in pitching their own comic, which is fine as that's the purpose of this forum, but it's really annoying when 99% of the people have nothing to say about others' comics. I appreciate the hard work put in by most comic artists, but I ask all those who pitch their comics to stay more active on this forum and help us all benefit from critiques. )

Now coming to your own comic, I like your drawing style - effective, bold and strong lines. Your usage of colour is also fantastic. I think your characters are good looking, but I am not a big fan of manga-style drawing myself - and I could see that your characters are slightly influenced by that style. As for the storylines, it's not easy to get drawn into your style. It seems a bit disjointed from page to page. With a little bit of editing, I'm sure you'll improve your script writing skills.

Keep up the good work.

[LToEV]

Thanks for the imput harishankar i have one question when you where saying the pages seem disjointed do you mean like page by page of one comic like shrink one dose not flow well to shrink two or shrink dose not flow well to crazy us ?

[Harishankar]

Let me give you an example.

In the first comic "Shrinks are Us", between page 3 and page 4, I couldn't follow the action. The last frame of page 3 and the first page of frame 4 does not seem to connect very well. Also the action sequences are pretty rushed and because the frames are small, I don't get a feel of what's going on in the story.

I think that you need to slow down the action or script the frames better to allow a reader to get into the action. Right now, most of your pages just seem full of disjointed frames without giving me an idea of what the story is about.

[Rhenny]

Good layout, nice color job! I would move your promo work to a gallery, having as part of the first few strips seems like padding. The bolding inking really works for your style!

[Boozeathon4billion]

I like the style and layout, but I would put some kind of navigation links on the front page if you can. Once you're in the comic section its nice and easy to cruise here and there, but I was a bit confused on how to see the previous comic at first. Other than that, its looking pretty cool (although I'm still reading through the archive).

I do agree with Rhenny though. Starting off the archive with filler/promos just isn't a good technique. I'd throw it under a promo/extras part of the site instead.

[LToEV]

Yea i took the filler art off. I also know i need to change the navigation thanks for the imput. Also we have updated so check it out

[Jaybob81]

Love the art and overall composition. I'm not in love with the story, but that's a personal preference. Draw out the action a little more and you've got a winner for sure.

[LToEV]

Thanks sorry you did not like the random storys. Thanks for the coment

[LToEV]

bump

so we got more comics so check us out

[DCG]

Good comic, and I actually like the idea behind the story style. How life really is, just little stories. Any way not sure if you fixed the navigation on the main page since Booze-a-thon commented, but navigation from there is still somewhat confusing. Rest of the site is nice and simple. Keep up the good work.

[LToEV]

no im still trying to get some bugs out of our site

[Grimsg]

Hey ya,

You've got a great artstyle going. Crisp, clean and very accurate to the Anime artstyle. I'm not quite into random anime camp but none the less, the otaku zombie guy is well..creepy.

Keep drawing, you've got a good thing going.

Grimsg

[Moder]

I like the art though personally im not a manga fan...
Anyways, congratulations! Nice work!

[LToEV]

Thanks for all your feed back, it is very helpfull.
Lloyd (writer for L&ToEV)

[LooneyBinProduction]

Good artwork and coloring, easy to read as well. My only thing is when you substitute stuff for Disney with "Bisney" for your Kingdom Blood comic set. I can understand not wanting to get in trouble for copyright, but if you're really worried about it just put a disclaimer. It's obviously a parody, therefore there's no reason to censor the company's name or related characters (like Sora).

[LToEV]

Thank you everybody we have reach 51 fans and we thought when we reach 50 we have a contest. So here it is send us your fan art of your favorite charter no Yaoi please of eather sex thats are only rule. The winer will get their art posted on our site and if they have a comic we will link them and talk about their comic. I know it not much but it will be fun. Please email all fan art to thelifeofericvirgin@gmail.com
Thanks Lloyd (writer of L&ToEV)

[LToEV]

monthly bump