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New comic, the Uncommons

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:33 am
by Falconire
I'm starting my second comic called the Uncommons, a superhero murder mystery comic of sorts. I only have three pages done so far and it won't have a site until I get between 6-10 done so I actually have something to show but until then I'd like to get some feedback on what people think.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic2.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic3.jpg

edit/yeahduff/please mind the image restrictions. Feel free to repost after choosing one and fixing it.

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 10:54 am
by Redtech
Regardless of ANY opinions to be made, you need to have 20 comics in an archive to be able to have a fair apraisal. It's only fair to yourself in the long run, and also it's part of the rules of posting here.

Posted: Sun Dec 16, 2007 5:41 pm
by Warofwinds
You need to post in the Techniques, Tips and Tricks forum, pal^^ This forum is for pimpage only. Looks like you're off to a good start though! Solid composition and use of color, and an attention-grabbing type of beginning. I would say focus a little more on the anatomy of your characters. While you've chosen a cartoony style, a little more proportioning would make the art more attractive than it is. Also, eyes are crooked in panel panels. ;)