Fire and Ice Empire

FAIM · Post by **FAIM** » Thu Oct 26, 2006 10:47 am

Fire and Ice Empire is about an elfin prince questing to avenge his fathers death, and unkowingly save the nations from a terrible evil. There are many characters entertwined with it all and pretty humorous. So there you have it.

go to:
http://fireandiceempire.comicgenesis.com/

[AOD] · Post by **[AOD]** » Thu Oct 26, 2006 3:45 pm

Mmm... here's a tip about layout: the CG automated updater thing already looks for "***first_day***" and the like - you don't need to write them separately. Otherwise we can't see your links.

@~AOD

Komiyan · Post by **Komiyan** » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:29 pm

I can't actually see any comics, just a splash page. You need to have like, 20 pages down before you can pitch here, cause there's nothing for us to look at yet..

Hallonpress · Post by **Hallonpress** » Fri Oct 27, 2006 12:40 am

The comics are there, just press "archive"... Only five actual comic pages are there, though.

I read it. It shows that you are new to comics, since it's a bit hard to decipher what's going on, but at least you have ambition, and that's a good thing.

One question. Why did you make it read from right to left? There is really no reason to. On the contrary, it makes the comic even harder to follow. And making a comic read like a manga doesn't make it a manga.

Post by **Mercury Hat** » Fri Oct 27, 2006 8:51 am

You need 20 comics in your archive before you can pitch, and you have about 5 or 6. This thread's locked.