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*Actually, you probably won't find boobs in my comic. Or will you? ... No.
You might, however, find a strange young man and his Doll. If you've got a weird sense of humour you may enjoy this. Or hate it. But personally I think it's too cute to hate.

I knew you were going to trick me and I clicked anyways.

What's this php file my browser tries to get me to download when I click on your site?

I like your writing - very dark humor, sort of like that Anti-Christ Teddy Bear comic I read earlier. Strips like this one are hilarious.

There isn't actually much I can critique - other than I want to read more pages. Perhaps you could do a few strips about the source of Don's antisocial behaviour?

I've been a reader for quite some time (almost since the beginning) and I love both the art, which is disturbingly simple on one hand, but yet fits better than anything with its air of being so out of place compared to generic webcomic, and the story. Especially the recent "change of place" was stunning o much you could only love it :D

As for th boobs in topic. Well, I can hardly imagine Don having any, and isn't Doll to much of a lady to show hers?

;)

Biev wrote:What's this php file my browser tries to get me to download when I click on your site?

I suspect you may be having this problem.

Yup, that's exactly what it was.

Thanks for the comments guys! It's always nice to get feedback, especially when whoring oneself out I truly do love making this comic, and it's a fantastic boost when others like it too.

that's why angels are so fat.

so far my favorite line in the cOmic. i must respond because someone is comparing our strips and this infuriates me . . . wait, no, wrong word, interests me, that's it, wait, no, sickens m--no, makes me feel weirdy in my Brain . . . what's the word for that? oh yEs, prozac.

your comic interests me. reminds of that williAm goldman book they turNed into a movie with pre-hannibal hopkins, magic i think it was. i don't like reading anyway, it puts thouGhts in my head, like specks of crumbs on a clEan countertop.

i like the deSign of you webpage Much better than my own, and those doll's eyes Are haunting me. maKe her turn them off . . . or up. i am rEading and starting to like it (your comic) a little more. i think it can only get Better which is not A way of saying it can't get worse. it was supposeD to be a Compliment. i'm nO good at this. that's why i'M a shut in, wait, wrong word, that's why i should shut uP. thAt's it. if it continues to iNterest me I may have tO link to it.

oh and fyi: fried cheese at 3 am is fiNe as long as you chaSe it down with amaretto.

tbac

Ack! Tricked! I'll get you elusive mammory glands! I'll geeeet yooouuu!

anyway, back to what is important. I like the comic alot. I have to agree with what the past couple people have said, especially about those Doll eyes. Your sense of humor is well developed as well and the art makes my own comic feel inferior. Darn you!

Good comic. The first time I clicked through the comic on the first page wasn't so good and I passed. Now that I've gone through the archives I see what it's about.

BTW: A layer of shadow done in dark brown and set to multiply could do wonders for each individual character. Especially the doll. The darkness just behind that bright face could send people to the psychiatrist.