patahern wrote:i just bought a fat sack of weed tonight
This will let you make strips, nobody understands but you, which is fun while you are at it, but makes you frustrated later on. At least in my experience. The quality of my work got way better once I stayed sober. And I had a lot, I know what I am talking of.
For your work: I like the way you mix background with lineworks. Aestetically quite intriguing. I think it would drift better, if there was a common element to the strips. It would also heighten your chance to place a hook in your reader's mouth.