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Everyone Cheers! :)

Postby Patahern on Fri Apr 15, 2005 2:13 pm

Hi! I recently started a webcomic named Everyone Cheers!

Theres 9 or 10 up now with more written and a few drawn. I update every whenever.

http://www.thefriendsociety.com/everyonecheers

^^theres the link

feedback and critique on the art aswell as scripts is greatly greatly appreciated and valued :)

thanks!

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Postby Soup Goblin on Fri Apr 15, 2005 7:14 pm

I like how your comic is written and laid out. I like how every new day is a new situation, with new characters and setting, basically letting you tell an infinite number of unique short stories. I like the artwork. Overall very nice presentation.
More important than any of that, it actually made me laugh.
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Postby Ryuko on Fri Apr 15, 2005 10:48 pm

I like the art style in most of these, but in some of them it just doesn't work. The most recent one looks good, but in others the colors clash or the characters blend too much into the background.

And the jokes funniness also varies wildly. Some of them were hilarious, like the first one and the Dilbert parody one, but the rest of the jokes, though they could be funny, suffer from timing and confusion delays. The twins one especially I had to read twice before I got that there was a joke.

But aside from all that, it's really difficult to tell how the comic's going to go with only 9 comics in the archive. I think you should put up a few more and then maybe resubmit or bump this thread.
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Postby Jaybob81 on Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:30 pm

That's the second Kurt Kobain joke I've seen this week, once on Robot Chicken and now you. Bad. Bad.

Good luck with the strip though, although I can't quite tell if it has a direction yet.
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Postby Stolle on Sat Apr 16, 2005 9:47 am

Weird art style...not sure what to think yet.
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Postby Patahern on Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:10 pm

thanks for checking it out guys :))))

i dont really know what to say i just bought a fat sack of weed tonight 8) 8) 8) 8)

thanks for noticing, its supposed to be not a regular strip with continuing characters and all i mean, its supposed to be new each time, thanks. i dunno im trying to stay to a style, some i think are a lot closer to that style (despite if tyheyre worsly drawn) and that they are better comics. i dont know.

thanks for the comments :)

i wanted to reply when i update but i wanted to reply to everyones comments now too :)

i think i am going to upload 2 new ones in a few hours or tomorrow. i'll probably post again in excitement haha idk :oops: :oops: :oops:

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Postby The Neko on Sat Apr 16, 2005 11:00 pm

I'd check out the Perry Bible Fellowship. Seems like your style.
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Postby Patahern on Sun Apr 17, 2005 1:06 am

ive been getting that once about once on every fourm im on, but its usually the guy that brushes my stuff off and dosent look at it much. i dunno i read a bunch and i think theyre great i just think the story format is similar. :\

any ideas on how i can get my particular comic bigger???
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Postby Lucien of BOS on Sun Apr 17, 2005 1:18 am

Theres some comics in it that I like,

And then there are many I dont.

Its like the style if always used effectively, it could be put to use for some awesome work.

But if you dont put a good amount of effort into it, the results suffer.
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Postby Patahern on Sun Apr 17, 2005 1:34 am

come on i have a process that goes through pencil and then scanned and then flash and painst shop pro and thebn photoshop D: i try to pay as close attention to dsetail as possible and eventhough i have a routine system worked out for it, i average like 4 or 5, more hours doing it, and countless hours worrying aobut and going over the joke and thinking of it weeks in advanced ahaha (ahah for like 2 or 3 of those it was done right when they were thought of but most of the ideas are old.

i put in effort dont give me that :(((

im about to update RIGHT NOW ;o :)) one min let me ftp ?? :(
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Postby Lucien of BOS on Sun Apr 17, 2005 2:04 am

So maybe 'effort' wasnt the word I was looking for ^^;

But there are definatley panels that stand out from the rest.

Though its awesome to hear you put so much time into these, devotion is always needed in an artist.

The updates were amusing, to say the least. yet I find myself paying more attention to the art itself than the words.

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Postby LibertyCabbage on Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:07 am

i think the art's great but the jokes are lame...
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Postby Patahern on Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:11 am

but wait untill you see these new ones im working on !!! :D :D :D
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Postby SquirtEryna on Sun Apr 17, 2005 10:15 am

the art is very different but its quite appealing... at least to me. :D
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Postby LibertyCabbage on Sun Apr 17, 2005 4:55 pm

pata wrote:but wait untill you see these no ones im working on !!!


squirt wrote:the art is very different but its quite appealing... at least too me.


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Postby Yeahduff on Mon Apr 18, 2005 12:34 am

Dude....
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Postby Patahern on Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:02 am

yeahduff wrote:Dude....

?? :(
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Postby Yeahduff on Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:36 pm

I'll clarify.


Liberty Cabbage, would you stop criticizing people's spelling on the boards? No one cares, so long as it's not leet. Criticize the spelling and grammar on the comics all you want, but not here.
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Postby Stolle on Mon Apr 18, 2005 10:54 pm

A reprimand! Wooohoo! :D
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