The dark days comic

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Darkdays
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The dark days comic

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george is 15 and is attending an all boys school in south west england and doing his GCSE year the only thing is he on the inside is a she, Jolie

this is a story of a young transgendered girl tries to make it through secondary school her mother died when she was nine and her father owns the local pub

there is one boy, tomas who dosnt like george to be jolie, and he will go to any level to keep "fags" out of the school

http://darkdays.keenspace.com

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Steverules
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Okay, here goes. Your writing is okay and I think this could really be an interesting story. But your strips are plagued with misspellings. That is simple and easily correctible. I also found the strip where you introduce yourself and your
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