Plugging WtR

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Plugging WtR

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http://waytoorandom.keenspace.com

Way too Random, is the story (kinda) of three college students going about there daily lives, and two of them who are trying to get a webcomic to work and be liked. there are stories, and the comic follows a general liner plot, but really we just say that to make ourselves feel better and the comic doesn't know where it is where it was or where it's going.

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Post by Bass Master Fei »

MAKE YOUR LETTERING BIGGER.

And that's it for my all-caps sentences.

Your art's all right, but kind of awkward-looking at times. I'd suggest practicing facial expressions, first of all, and then looking into a mirror to try and draw the poses, cause the proportions don't always look right.

Seriously. The lettering's not as bad as it used to be, but that one comic on March 14? Yeah.
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Post by Shadowmimiiru »

yeah, the lettering has always been a problem, i've fixed it i think.
thanks for the comments, although i don't think my face is a good idea for pratciing with :)

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I guess you fixed it since it looks fine to me. Nice stuff.
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