Way too Random, is the story (kinda) of three college students going about there daily lives, and two of them who are trying to get a webcomic to work and be liked. there are stories, and the comic follows a general liner plot, but really we just say that to make ourselves feel better and the comic doesn't know where it is where it was or where it's going.
Your art's all right, but kind of awkward-looking at times. I'd suggest practicing facial expressions, first of all, and then looking into a mirror to try and draw the poses, cause the proportions don't always look right.
Seriously. The lettering's not as bad as it used to be, but that one comic on March 14? Yeah.
yeah, the lettering has always been a problem, i've fixed it i think.
thanks for the comments, although i don't think my face is a good idea for pratciing with