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Postby Cheyenne Wright on Fri Jun 04, 2004 4:23 pm

My name is Cheyenne Wright and I have just lept head first into the Keenspace gene pool. Please take a look at my comic and let me know what you think.


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Postby Amberchrome on Fri Jun 04, 2004 6:25 pm

Looks neat... nice snappy style to it.

'mouseferatu' rocks 8)
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Postby Ruxen on Fri Jun 04, 2004 9:22 pm

Looks great and I like your humor, consider me hooked. :)
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Postby RPin on Fri Jun 04, 2004 9:51 pm

Damn! I need the password to enter the Peg Bigwigs only area BAD! :lol:

You layout seems to be strangely pushing vertical scrolling beyond necessary, by the way.
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Postby BOMC on Sat Jun 05, 2004 7:59 am

i love your art style, it's quite spiffy
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Postby Amoeba_Guy on Sat Jun 05, 2004 2:31 pm

I gotta say, so far I think this stuff is brilliant. I especially liked the look on the guys face while 'bad-mouse' was doing nothing more than squeeking.
Keep it up, you got another reader.
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Postby Cheyenne Wright on Mon Jun 07, 2004 11:49 am

First off -- thanks for the kind words, all of you! Just knowing that SOMEBODY is reading it other than me and the people I force to look at it, helps a great deal. It's tough to be motivated otherwise.

Today's strip was a little late - sorry. But it IS up now and it IS still today... so as far as I'm concerned I made that deadline :D

As for my layout pushing vertical scrolling beyond necessary, I'll see what I can do. Any tips?

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Postby Ayame Ex_Goddess on Fri Jun 11, 2004 9:15 am

Funny funny stuff man, and your art style is, well, excellent. I can only imagine the long days and nights mouseferatu stared at that doorknob trying to will it to move. heh heh heh. Right up there with "ah yes. My friend the squeegee. I love you."

I'll definately be keeping up with this comic
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Postby Dr Legostar on Tue Jun 15, 2004 4:21 pm

Excellent comic, I especially liked your monuments to Joss Whedon. Actually that's not true, I especially liked the whole comic. I am at once sad that there was not a larger archive and happy that I got in on or near the ground floor reading your comic.
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Postby ZorroandEster on Thu Jul 08, 2004 10:56 am

Yeah you won me over too. I'm bookmarking it, so that people (all 3 of them) who come to my site see it. Keep up the great work.
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Postby Zanzarra on Thu Jul 08, 2004 12:59 pm

woah, your pitch is still here.

well then, i wanted to say your comic rocks...
and, uh, its kinda in my links section...

but dont make this another mmorpg comic, please!
some stuff about city of heroes is ok, but return to "normal" storyline eventually...
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Postby Hiye on Mon Jul 12, 2004 5:48 pm

Love it. Great stuff.

I'll keep checking up on this one.

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Postby Jackhass on Mon Jul 12, 2004 10:12 pm

Didn't read too much of it.

But nice art...and you can't go wrong with bashing Van Helsing. That movie was unbelievably abysmal...

A zoo full of cute yet uproariously funny animals...how can you go wrong?

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Postby Xodin on Wed Jul 14, 2004 1:06 am

Wow, that's really beautiful art. I like it alot. Have any plans to add color at some point? Although in many ways I think leaving it in Black and White might actually be cooler. Totally going on my links list.

Mouseferatu is, btw, a truly wonderful creation. I'm curious about seeing him eat a Twinkie for some reason.

Have any interests in Guest Strips or crossovers?
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Postby TheSuburbanLetdown on Thu Jul 15, 2004 10:02 pm

That's some funny stuff you have there. The writing is pretty tight so far, and the art is great too. I'll keep checking this comic.
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