A comic that is either original or grossly derivative.

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Drowin
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A comic that is either original or grossly derivative.

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That's probably as good a review as I'll ever expect considering the very Ziggy-esque lack of humor in the very beginning of my comic.

http://ooccomic.comicgenesis.com

Hopefully, I can get back to posting new ones soon so it can stopped being judged by my artistic talents of yester year.

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I think you need to work on your anatomy, use word balloons and maybe ad shading. So far it seems like a beginning comic. If you keep up and practice drawing it then it should evolve artwise. I liked your 3 dragon ante joke btw.

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Working archive links are helpful XD. I began at the start and liked the idea of the elf from an RPG ending up in "our" world XD. Aand the latest strip looks pretty good, colourful and simple, it "does it's job" which is all you need when the words are what really carries the story... i can never force myself to draw simple any more XD
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Dude, don't sell yourself short. If anything you want to be exaggerating how good your comic is. If it is grossly derivative just don't tell anyone. There will be enough pretentious jackasses pointing that out for you when you hit the big time.

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