TEDDY BEAR ANTI-CHRIST Season III (3)

[TBAC]

Why is it when you put things in caps people think you're screaming?

I'm not sure what I want from you. This is so much babbling

Fine, pitch, whatever. Pitch black, pitch tar, alright already I'm getting to it.

Season 3 of TBAC begins tomorrow -- what is tomorrow? I lose track of time sometimes.

I draw because of the headaches and because I get sick of Teddy tugging on my pants legs (I thought I beat him; didn't wear pants one day; skin is still healing).

LUCY: Poor little girl. Just want to rush in and save her, don't ya? Well, you can't. Her mom has been arrested for the death of her husband (Unkey Jewwy -- Lucy's STEP father). Now Lucy gets the marvelously healthy experience of a foster home with good old Father Barry (is he really a father or does he just dress like one?).

TEDDY: The usual. Wicked. Evil. But really really cuddly. Like the title bar says "It's EVIL with sugar on it!"

I'm done. Tired and drunk and pills are making me queasy and Teddy is scratching at my door again; they'll be a pile of splinters in the morning. Again.

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TBAC

[Guildmaster Van]

Wow, this comic has a lot of potential.

In particular I think your manner of writing for Teddy is pretty good, and reminds me Jhonen Vasquez a bit. He's a pure ball of stuffing and evil, without feelings of guilt or remorse.

Your writing is excellent, and the only thing I could suggest is perhaps work on making your art a bit more stylistic so it can accentuate the madness of it all. You should think about using Jhonen as a role-model in this situation, as his insane writing is only made better by his DRAWING STYLE OF SCREAMY SILLY MADNESS AND DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

*cough*

In any event; good look on future pages and think about what I suggested.