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[Halflight]

A general thread for your comments on my comic site. Constructive criticism is always welcome, flames are tolerated if they have something substantial to say ('you suck' is meaningless and silly fluff, and will be ignored or deleted. 'you suck because... [blah blah]', inserting in place of blah blah some relevant observation relating to my comic or my site, is fine. Try to keep the language down, though.)

Feel free to put your email address and URL if you want to.

[ZOMBIE USER 11424]

Wow, I'm very surprised nobody's posted yet... I found your comic on onlinecomics.net and I'm very impressed. Every now and then I like to add a new comic to my favourites that I always check in on, and I have quickly added this one!

[Uneide]

I think you know that I am partial to your work. I find your storytelling superb, the pacing appropriate and your style original and rather refreshing.

will keep checking back of course... and granted, I'm starting to like the "snow" Queen... more depth to her character inthe past few strips. ^_^

[Zoz]

I must say that I do like this comic quite a bit... occassionally I'm at work I get bored and non-commital I'll cruise the internet for something interesting and I stumbled across this strip. Don't get me wrong I like anime and all but one of the things I did like about your strip was the semi-manga western feel to it... I hate those damn cutsy round elves they make in manga :-p

But seriously... I've always been partial to fantasy and the storyline is good... one question though... do we get to see Arkadi eventually? Just curious. Also noticed you're from New York... heh my home state I ended up moving to Texas like two years ago... still miss home sometimes tho'

Anyhoot keep up the good work I look forward to seeing more from you!

[Halflight]

hey, thanx all!

itea's getting better? yay! i had hoped she wouldn't be TOO horrible ^_~. snowy, huh? heh... i always thought of her according to fire and hot things, but youre right; she is pretty frigid

alas... homesickness. i just moved into my college dorm 2 days ago and found out what that word meant, even though i didn't move far or even leave the state... ::sigh::

yes, you will see arkadi. chapter 14 ends soon, and he appears at the very end of chapter 15. from then on he should be a constant character.

manga is nice, but it gets overdone a lot. my favorite webcomics also, be they manga or otherwise, are the ones that have the unique or distinctive styles. so, thanks!

i can't say i dislike manga elves, really... record of lodoss war is gorgeous (i get jealous every time i look at it ;9 ) but i guess i wouldn't have chosen something like them for for my comic even if i could draw like that. they're too... i don't know... special... ?magical...? removed from the mundane...? for what i would want my characters to be... so i guess i know what you mean.

Again, thanks everybody!

[Halflight]

doh!

er... that was 13 ends soon and 14 ends w/ arkadi. o_0
(you'd think i'd know these things....)

[Zoz]

Yes Lodoss War does rock (own the whole set heh) no it's a certain KIND of Manga style I dislike I personally feel the whole Pokemon style is annoying as hell.

As for anime one of my former favorite titles before they screwed with it was the Heroic Legend of Arislan and then they release like part 5 or something and started calling it the Heroic Legend of Arslan... stating previous iterations of the story had all the name pronunciations incorrect! WTF! yeah that ticked me off....

Originally I went to College in a little town upstate called Plattsburgh... SUNY school. But that was 300+ miles from home when my parents left I realized I knew no one and no one really cared about me either... it's devastating and so I proceeded to get good and drunk to get over it! LOL.

[Isolde]

Your artwork is very beautiful. It seems very dark, but brings a sense of reality to your characters and scenery. The characters seem to be gaining a bit of depth, and I hope you'll keep up the good work!

[WinterBear]

I must say I like your style. Not the typical elven heros and such here. Very gritty with a distinct feel. Keep up the good work!

When are you going to post more??