Okay, here's my criticism for this week: EEEEEEWWW!
I made a bolognaise that went 'splop' once. It looked a lot like Vanchek's head. I request a PG rating for similar scenes in future: 'Warning: May Contain Goozy Stuff. Dahmiel About To Blow Shit Up.'
Now to the vaguely constructive part of the post. I have a question from last week's strip, which I was going to ask last week: can you translate Riley's spell from pretty Dahmiel-script into English? (No, I won't blow off anyone's head with it. Promise.) The public has a right to know. Actually, I just want to know. Pretty please?
By the way, I think I've pinpointed your two best drawing skills now: shadows and gunk. Your gunk is very gunky. Especially in the last panel this week - the popped-out eye and bit of scalp with hair on it are, um, yuck.