Ohemgee wrote:I love the art, I only have a couple things to say: your expressions are wonderful, except sometimes they don't quite fit the action. for example on this page in the first panels the girls have very blank expressions even though they're fighting. At the bottom of the page however, the expressions are absolutely fantastic.
Secondly, (minor technicality) make sure that your line art isn't too light. If it's too light it's difficult to see the characters (especially for people with crappy monitors) and it then clashes with the black panel lines and text.
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