Backgrounds and Action shots

Think your comic can improve? Whether it's art or writing, composition or colouring, feel free to ask here! Critique and commentary welcome.

Post Reply
User avatar
Lianweijun086
Regular Poster
Posts: 135
Joined: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:31 am

Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by Lianweijun086 »

Hey guys, as a semi-new artist, I've been playing around with a lot of stuff, like backgrounds, ESPECIALLY those related to action sequences. I've found one that I kind of like (the streaky lines that you see in old school TMNT), but I've found myself kind of overusing it. A side from that, I've tried color splashing (simple gradients),... and that's about it. I've run out of ideas.

http://twfc.comicgenesis.com/d/20090616.html
http://twfc.comicgenesis.com/d/20090620.html

The backgrounds have come down to this, which is the point at which I'm REALLY unhappy with it. So my main question is everything regarding backgrounds in action sequences. When do I use a normal background, when do I use the flashy colors. And secondly, are there any other cool effects that you would use to draw my action scenes? Thank you so much!

PS. As always, I'd appreciate any comments on the rest of the comic as well. http://twfc.comicgenesis.com
Image
Updates Tuesdays and Saturdays. Any and all comments/criticisms will be greatly appreciated!

User avatar
Lianweijun086
Regular Poster
Posts: 135
Joined: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:31 am

Re: Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by Lianweijun086 »

... I'm sorry, I didn't get that at all. Are you typing through a translator or something? Thanks for the reply though!
Image
Updates Tuesdays and Saturdays. Any and all comments/criticisms will be greatly appreciated!

User avatar
VeryCuddlyCornpone
Cartoon Hero
Posts: 3245
Joined: Tue Feb 10, 2009 3:02 pm
Location: the spoonited plates of Americup
Contact:

Re: Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by VeryCuddlyCornpone »

Sorry boyo, looks like it was just a spammer.

I have yet to draw anything with thrilling action backgrounds, so I'm afraid I'm not much help. Except I like the streaky TMNT look, but you already said you think you overuse it.

I've been meaning to check out your comic since a million years ago. I think I'm going to do that this weekend. Hooray plans!
Image
Don't kid yourself, friend. I still know how.
"I'd much rather dream about my co-written Meth Beatdown script tonight." -JSConner800000000

User avatar
Lianweijun086
Regular Poster
Posts: 135
Joined: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:31 am

Re: Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by Lianweijun086 »

VCC, thanks for the support! I really hope you like my work. Hopefully my crappy backgrounds and effects will not deter you from reading >.< I promise, I'm trying my best to learn and improve!
Image
Updates Tuesdays and Saturdays. Any and all comments/criticisms will be greatly appreciated!

W M
Regular Poster
Posts: 51
Joined: Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:25 pm
Location: false

Re: Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by W M »

Maybe look up digital screentones--if you've never heard of these, they're basically patterned backgrounds (very simplistic patterns so as not to take away from the foreground). You can usually find some nice packs of them for free download on google.

Originally, they were used in traditional comics as translucent paper with pattens that you could peel off, stick on the panel, and cut away excess, which made filling in patterned backgrounds very fast for the busy comic artist.

(but maybe you already know about screentones--sorry if this is nothing new :roll: )

User avatar
Lianweijun086
Regular Poster
Posts: 135
Joined: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:31 am

Re: Backgrounds and Action shots

Post by Lianweijun086 »

No, actually that was really helpful! I've no education in art whatsoever and so everything is pretty new to me. Thanks a lot, I will definitely look into it!
Image
Updates Tuesdays and Saturdays. Any and all comments/criticisms will be greatly appreciated!

Post Reply