my sprite comic

[Csf777]

its called zombie invasion hheres the imgage
By csf1234 at 2007-08-15

[NakedElf]

If I can't see it, it's automatically bad.

[Rianeva]

Is this a joke? I managed to get at the comic (had to clear my cache) and it's almost incoherent. A lot of the text is unreadable, what I can read makes no sense, and the art doesn't get the point across. I wouldn't have known this was a comic about zombies if it hadn't said so.

[NakedElf]

Given that the original poster couldn't even be bothered to make the comic actually show up, I'd put my odds on 'stupid' rather than 'joke'. I mean, what's the point of making a joke if people can't even see it?

[Godai]

Epic failure. Recycled "art", unreadable dialogs, no regard to the reader and only little more of a plot (well, there is some plot, the pics are set in a linear manner).

Sigh. Not bookmarking it as of now.

By the way, once upon a time moderators used to use PMs to explain discrepancies in points of view ;) Made less of a mess.

[Csf777]

ill work on it more next time thanks for the feedback

[Csf777]

ok i am hosting it at http://theinvasion.smackjeeves.com/ come chek it out

[NakedElf]

Don't use ComicSans.

Spellcheck. Please. Misspelling 'people' is really bad and makes it look like you don't care about quality. If you don't care about your comic, why should we?

Where is the comic? I am confused. I don't see a comic.

[Mercury Hat]

Actually, comic sans is the default on smackjeeves sites, I think.

[NakedElf]

EW.

[Plothole]

Well, the "speech" is mostly unreadable. There's also a very poor contrast between sprite and background in several panels.

And if you must work with sprites, at least give credit where credit is due. And by that I mean place the proper copyright notices, indicating the actual owners of said sprites.