Any progress?

Hollowghoul · Post by **Hollowghoul** » Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:35 pm

Eleven months and an handful of days...
Since I am getting close to a year of drawing comics I would really appreciate a critique of my work.

Can you tell me if I made any progress since the beginning?

Thank you.

Wp · Post by Wp » Mon Mar 13, 2006 2:36 pm

I can't tell if you've improved by any large margin. In terms of drawing ability, that is. I'm unsure of what else I can critique since your story telling is pretty consistent throughout.

I have to say, though, you've kept my curiosity since you showed up around here. Very intriguing story.

The Snoo · Post by **The Snoo** » Tue Mar 14, 2006 4:54 pm

The art is more or less consistent throughout, plot seems decent enough, and I like the way the site draws itself as it loads. It might be nice if you were to put in some kind of background color or image for the site; I hate staring at white screens. But, that would clash with your art, unless you started working in a style similar to that of Liz at Stuff Sucks; it really lends itself to a colorful web design. Other than that, I have no thoughts. I am, after all, a man of few words.