13th Labour Composition

Think your comic can improve? Whether it's art or writing, composition or colouring, feel free to ask here! Critique and commentary welcome.

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13th Labour Composition

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Although I know I have a lot to work on, I thought I'd focus on composition for a little while. Things like creating visual interest and leading the eye on while not significantly increasing the amount of time I have to spend on each comic. Could anyone take a look and give me a few hints?
-Amarantha.
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Mon ami, you should have something better to do than make things up all the time.

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