Critique needed for character design

Think your comic can improve? Whether it's art or writing, composition or colouring, feel free to ask here! Critique and commentary welcome.

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Gengar003
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Post by Gengar003 »

Jen_Babcock wrote:put some fingers on that guy.
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JohnLynch
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Thanks everyone for your help. I've made some of the changes you suggested (and others I'll try to make as I improve).
warofwinds wrote:Adding a wrist would help a lot. The arm doesn't go straight into the hand, especially when holding something. Also extend the lines of the leg a little high so you can see which leg is in front and which is in back.
Do you have any good tutorials (or suggestions) on doing wrists? Looking at my own, I can see they're angled slightly different to the arm, and are fatter.
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