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I would just like some constructive criticism
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:10 pm
by The_Dude
I was just wondering if I could get some constructive criticism from some of the more experienced webcomic folk.
Comics name is
Danger Music
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:44 pm
by Oualawouzou
You should put this in "comic pitching" instead of "help center".
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:03 pm
by Cortland
Or better yet, in Technique Tips and Tricks. I think we usually like to have between ten and thirty strips before a pitch. Moderator! Can we let a lift, please?
I looked of your couple of strips, and I like them!
You seem to have the web comic format down pretty well, and your characters (in the limited space you've given them so far) seem to have an appropriate amount of banter. Artwise, I think your lines need to be a bit bolder. The anti-alias effect of a Photoshop paint bucket seems to be weakening them a great deal.
Until I see more strips, I'm afraid I can't say much more, but keep going!
Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:23 pm
by Phalanx
TTT it is, then. I'll move it.
And oi, cortland, Keencards...
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:42 am
by Faub
Since you already have another thread with more and better posts. I'm just going to lock this one.