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hit me. fast.

Postby I_Ragnarok on Mon Oct 21, 2002 6:10 am

I've launched my site
http://fast.keenspace.com
(9 pages in the archives already)

And I'd like some comments.
My main focus is:
dynamics&movement
body proportions
and quite-realistic-looking fights

if I'm screwing up on these, tell me please.

edit:
the site is new, and admins say that sometimes
"it takes time for new accounts to settle"
so if there are any problems accesing my site they should be temporary.
you want to fight?
well, bring it on!
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Postby Te'Targa on Thu Oct 24, 2002 8:58 am

Just one question, do you practice Ai ki do??
I used to do that and there is a noticable simalarity in your comic...
Anyway it looks like it could turn out rather good, there are however some small perspective error that instantly shows.....
Keep't up...
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Postby Karlie on Thu Oct 24, 2002 1:22 pm

the rythem and movement are great.
make sure the panel order is clear
body proportioning is good, but keep an eye on it.

is there a story line to this, or is it just random fights?
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Postby I_Ragnarok on Fri Oct 25, 2002 4:11 am

about Ai ki do,
the similarity is intentional
I don't really practice it,
but I like the way it looks in S.Seagall's movies ;)
(I mean it looks efective and realistic, unlike others)
right now I only "practice" it in imagination and a little tai-chi style (to check where my arm would end up if someone pulled it like this) ;)
but I think I'm going to start, both for health and portraying it better on drawings.


and about the storyline:
as for now this are going to be random fights,
but maybe someday I'll link them by some storyline
(hence the "pending" status)
you want to fight?
well, bring it on!
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