I pretty much have the middle done, but...

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I pretty much have the middle done, but...

Postby JustSarah on Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:05 pm

In a way it was tempting to just throw away this story, after moving on to bigger and better things. I kind of consider it like how Anthony Burgess considered A Clockwork Orange before it was adapted by Stanley Kubrick. Its one of my historical works I'm not real proud of. (I have many)

Anyways, right now the middle is done, the beginning and end is kind of on the back burner right now. Just a heads up, this isnt a normal script. A friend of mine somewhere else mentioned it did read like a boring novel.XD Which I kind of agree.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/37301680/The%20 ... 20Shot.rtf

If this link doesnt work for you, I'll just put it in a PDF.
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