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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:53 pm
by Moo Cow
Awesome... good job with improving~
~Sara
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 4:47 pm
by Cherry-Blossom
*blushie* Here is a Haiku I wrote about the Cherry-Blossom tree.
The Cherry Blossom
Soft, pink snow drops, soft
Misty lanterns shed no light
Faded snow drops glow
It seems a tad conceited as my username is Cherry-Blossom but..it was not intended to be that way. I wrote it before I joined the forum.
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 6:05 pm
by Moo Cow
Ah, it's so pretty! I like it a lot. Very simple and beautiful. Nice job!
~Sara
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 12:37 am
by Cherry-Blossom
*Blushie* Really? You think so Moo? Thank you!
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 4:24 am
by Moo Cow
Indeed i do! Feel free to post more writings here!
~Sara
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 5:09 pm
by Megami
struck3xbylightning
yeah i want to see more art i love them...your a great artist
oh yeah cherry-blossom i love your writeing
megami
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 9:06 pm
by Cherry-Blossom
*Blushie* Thank you!
Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:01 am
by Megami
Cherry-Blossom i cant wait to read more of them your very good
megami
Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 10:39 pm
by Cherry-Blossom
*Blushie Blushie* Thank you again!
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 4:31 am
by Master killer
I'll be coming home
just to be alone
Cause I know you're not there
And I know you don't care
I can hardly wait to leave this place
No matter how hard I try
You're never satisfied
This is not a home
I think I'm better off alone
You always disappear
Even when you're here
This is not my home
I think I'm better off alone
Home, this house is not a home
By the time you come hom
I'm already stoned
You turn off the tv
And you scream at me
I can hardly wait
til you get off my case
No matter how hard I try
You're never satisfied
This is not a home
I think I'm better off alone
You always disappear
Even when you're here
This is not my home
I think I'm better off alone
Home, this house is not a home
Ths house is not a home
I'm better off alone
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:58 am
by Moo Cow
Wow... this is different from your other stuff.... I like it a lot. Did you write it? You know what hon? When you post stuff tell us if it's yours or not! *nods*
~Sara
my wondeful world...
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 11:30 pm
by Genetically_genesis
this is short and not all that sweet but first trys are the ones
that make u fall pregnant lol(<<< dont even ask)
so here it is...
I sit here in front of this blank piece of paper,
And think of what to say,
But no matter how much I think seems fine,
It sounds like with your emotions I continue to play,
For your love is the only thing I desire,
But you seem to think it
Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:16 am
by Moo Cow
Hey, i like it! Short and interesting... poignant
~Sara
Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:08 am
by Megami
The Man Who Sold The World
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We passed upon the stair
We spoke of was and when
Although I wasn't there
He said I was his friend
Which came as a surprise
I spoke into his eyes
I thought you died alone
A long long time ago
Oh no, not me
We never lost control
You're face to face
With The Man Who Sold The World
I laughed and shook his hand
And made my way back home
I searched for form and land (Alt: I searched for foreign land)
For years and years I roamed
I gazed a gazely stare
At all the millions here (Alt 1: We walked a million years)(Alt 2: With multimillionaires)(Alt 3: We walked a million hills)
I must have died alone (Alt: I must have died along)
A long, long time ago
(x2)
Who knows?
Not me
We never lost control
You're face to face
With the Man who Sold the World
i love this song its by nirvana my favorite band...
megami 8)
Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:36 am
by Moo Cow
MMm, that is a good song... great lyrics.
~sara
Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:34 pm
by Genetically_genesis
awww by nirvana i like got to the end and was like holy #@*% that is
awesome writing .... i was like jealous... that is an awesome song...
Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 12:53 am
by Cherry-Blossom
I really love the new poetry! Genetically Genesis has a sad depth. Master Killer's piece is also sorrowful writings.
Keep up the wonderful work!
(Where are my manners? Please keep up the great work, please.)
*Hee hee*
Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 10:51 am
by Megami
i love nirvana i just got the box set...
megami
Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2005 11:18 pm
by Genetically_genesis
Life Bears Love, Love Bears Hate,Why do we go through this torment,
The only good things in life come to late, Life seems stupid and life seems small,
but why do we have to go through this farce at all?
Things keep happening, people keep dying,
I dont see the point, i only see the lack of reasons,
No matter how hard i try, ALl it appears like, is everyone grows up to die
Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2005 1:18 am
by Genetically_genesis
TOday i was drowning,
drowning without water,
drowning in myself,
in my own self pity,
for what i do not have,
for what i have lost,
Today i was saved,
saved by you,
the one who saved me,
told me it was not true,
they had not saved me,
just simply loved me,
but my lief is better,
No longer do i drown in myself