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Wait, did you write thisor is it by someone else? Anyway, I do like it. Depressing but true.

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Wow, I really love that song Master ^.^ It's sad, but really beautiful (or at least that's what I think)

More poetry from Damned!

Love and War


They say that all
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

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Sadness and sorrow fill me. Your poetry has a definate beauty.
The winds swept her away
Forever forgotten

Hold tight

Too late

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no i *shiffty eyes* borrowed it
off smile empty souls
All smiles and sunshine, a perfect world on a perfect day!
Everythings gonna work out i have never felt so great!



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Sadness and sorrow fill me. Your poetry has a definate beauty.
^.^ Thank-kyuu Cherry *glomps* I scared my mum when I read her some of my poetry once- she though I was depressed XD

*tuts Master* It's not nice to "borrow" stuff from others unless you ask first *tackle glomps anyway* ^.^
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

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“If the people we love are stolen from us, the way to have them live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn. People die. But real love is forever.”- Eric, The Crow

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i love your first peom ......... i can't think of the right word to describe it but magnifisent will have to do.......*ponders weather it would come under Emo
All smiles and sunshine, a perfect world on a perfect day!
Everythings gonna work out i have never felt so great!



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Mou? You like it? ^.^ Thank-kyuu Master *glomps and huggles*
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

Today Venus is in amnesia and mercury is in opposition to Prozac. Forget about that werewolf in the cupboard under that stairs

“If the people we love are stolen from us, the way to have them live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn. People die. But real love is forever.”- Eric, The Crow

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Wow, Damned... you really do have a poignant way of writing. I like bot h poems a lot, especially the war one... *shivers*

And master, that didn't seem quite your style, I thought you might have borrowed it.

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^.^ *tackle glomps the Moo* Thank-kyuu Sara! *huggles* I'm glad that you like it ^.^

I wrote another one the day, and when I word-counted it, it was 600 words long (never knew that I could write such epic poetry)
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

Today Venus is in amnesia and mercury is in opposition to Prozac. Forget about that werewolf in the cupboard under that stairs

“If the people we love are stolen from us, the way to have them live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn. People die. But real love is forever.”- Eric, The Crow

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*collapses from glomp* Eek! YOu're welcome,.... I can't wait to see the new looong one!

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*grins* *huggles* Kay. It's kinda based on that topic that Cherry wrote "And Alice Fell down The Rabbit Hole" except it ran away on me and became something completly different ^.^;;

Through the Veil

She fell down the rabbit hole,
And into the world of Arcana,

She peered around,
Wide-eyed in amazement,
Slowly surveying the landscape,
With inescapable awe.

Everything was so lush and green,
Peppered with rainbow flowers.
The wind laughed and danced,
And the earth below her feet smelt faintly of lavender.

There she met a group of people,
Some menacing and unapproachable,
Some open, friendly and welcoming.

They strode across the garden of eternity to meet her,
Smiling and scowling.
And into her hands,
The placed a number of objects.

A girl,
With hair like rubies and eyes like that of a feral beast,
Handed her a sword,
Rusted with blood and sadness,
Tarnished with death and tears.

She felt pure horror as her fingers gripped it,
A gut-wrenching fear that paralysed her,
For the sword did not belong,
In the world of peace.

She puzzled immensely over this gift,
So much so that she barely noticed as two others approached,
A sun-crowned man and a small girl.

The man gave her an orb of pure, blinding light,
That filled her with hope,
Banishing the thoughts of the sword.

The girl child them handed over her own gift,
Love and joy,
Imprisoned in her heart forever more.

The last two of the peculiar group stood aside,
Solemn expressions marring their stunning, flawless features.

They moved forwards,
And when they gave their gifts to her,
She stood in wonder,
As awe filled her,
For the two had given her the greatest gift of all,
A choice between good and evil.
These two could bring her salvation or damnation.

And, with this realisation,
She saw the world for what it really was.

The grass, so lush and green,
Hid the scarred, weary earth below.
The green lushness hid the coarseness of the real world.
The wind laughed and sang, but mockingly- harshly,
Falling in a crescendo of screeching voice,
That could only belong to the poor souls in purgatory,
And the angels, fallen from heaven.

The lavender scent, so beautiful and sweet,
Hid the stench of death and decay below,
And the rainbow flowers hid vicious thorns within their folds.

All this, ignorance had hidden from her,
But the veil through which she had peered,
Had slipped and fell from her eyes.

And life, as it really, truly was,
Was finally revealed to her.

And she screamed in anguish,
For she wanted to be blind to it all,
To all the hate,
the death,
the sorrows,
the evil,
that grasped the world.

She wanted to be shielded from the harsh light of reality,
But she could not find any shade from it
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

Today Venus is in amnesia and mercury is in opposition to Prozac. Forget about that werewolf in the cupboard under that stairs

“If the people we love are stolen from us, the way to have them live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn. People die. But real love is forever.”- Eric, The Crow

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Wow, it's lovely, very epic indeed! Nicely written. *shivers*

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Wow.
So shocking and yet....
Wow.
Alice applauded loudly.
Wow.
The winds swept her away
Forever forgotten

Hold tight

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Time for a quote.
''When one door closes another door opens."
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good one...

an alternate i like


"When a door closes, a window opens"


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:cry: i missed you all now i have more time to write so i will be posting again
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Very nice Moo. Two styles- same meaning.

"...Three things happen when you get old. The first is that you lose your memory and I forget the second and third..."
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*hugs Megami* welcome back! Good luck with writing!

Thanks Cherry... that's a cute quote!


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Thank you moo! And toutes mes excuses to Magami! Where are my manners? Toutes mes excuses! All my apologies for not introducing myself and acknowledging your return to the forum! I am new and unwise in the ways of those on the arcana forum. Toutes mes excuses!
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*waves* Welcome back Megami!
Wow, it's lovely, very epic indeed! Nicely written. *shivers*

~Sara
*glomps* Thank-you Sara ^.^ I'm glad that you liked it ^.^
Wow.
So shocking and yet....
Wow.
Alice applauded loudly.
Wow
^.^ THankies to you too Cherry *tackle glomps as well*
"Cover her face;
Mine eyes dazzle;
she died young"- Queen of the Damned, John Webster

Today Venus is in amnesia and mercury is in opposition to Prozac. Forget about that werewolf in the cupboard under that stairs

“If the people we love are stolen from us, the way to have them live on is to never stop loving them. Buildings burn. People die. But real love is forever.”- Eric, The Crow

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