Anyone have poems/songs/short stories/art

Damned · Post by **Damned** » Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:01 pm

*falls over* I love that song! I know, it's wrong and it's not the best subject for a song but I love it *giggles hysterically* It's halarious *nodnod* I just got the new System of a Down album and it's one of my faveourite songs ^.^

Megami · Post by **Megami** » Thu Jun 30, 2005 12:50 am

Your sweat blood
when I see your sweat warm fresh blood dripping slowly down your fare neck.i want to take it all not leaveing any for him to take from you ,and steal from me what was once mine.so as I lay here in this forgotten prison I start to think why do things like this happen to a guy like me who never did anything bad before I was turned into a monster that can hurt you more than words ever could so deep down inside I don

Master killer · Post by **Master killer** » Fri Jul 01, 2005 11:39 am

In this hole
That is me
The dead are rolling over
In this hole
Thickening
Dirt shoveled over shoulders

I feel it in me
So overwhelmed
All this pressure centerizing
My life overturned
Unfair the despare
All these scars keep ripping open

Peel me from the skin
Tear meat from the rind
Does it make you happy now?

Tear meat from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy now?

In this hole
That is me
A life that's growing feeble
In this hole
So limiting
The sun has set; all darkens

Buried underneath
Hands slip off the wheel
Internal path-way to contention

Peel me from the skin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?

Tear meat from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy now?

Are you
HAPPY

Are you
HAPPY

Are you feeling happy?

In this hole
That is me
Left with a heart exhausted
What's my release??
What sets me free?
Do you pull me up just to push me down again?

Peel me from the skin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?

Tear meat from the bone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy?

Peel me from the skiiiiiiiiiin
Peel me from the skiiiiiiiiiin
Tear me from the rind
Does it make you happy now?

Tear me from the boooooooooone
Tear me from the boooooooooone
Tear me from myself
Are you feeling happy?

Does it make you happy?
Are you feeling happy?
Are you fucking happy?
Now that I'm lost left with nothing

Does it make you happy?
Are you feeling happy?
Are you fucking happy?
Now that I'm lost left with nothing?

Damned · Post by **Damned** » Sat Jul 02, 2005 12:19 am

That is so awesome Master! ^.^ I like it a lot, you can really see the emotion in it *nodnod* You really should find someone to put music to your lyrics- they'd make awesome songs.

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:40 am

Megami, it's good to see you again! I really like that piece, it's a neat style, stream of consciousness, I guess. It's very chilling and eerily beautiful. Nice.

Master, those lyrics are so biting and harsh! I love them! Very emotional. I agree with Damned that you need to find a musician to help you write them into songs!

~Sara

Struck3xbylightning · Post by **Struck3xbylightning** » Wed Jul 06, 2005 3:06 am

Moo Cow wrote: Master, those lyrics are so biting and harsh! I love them! Very emotional. I agree with Damned that you need to find a musician to help you write them into songs!

~Sara

You know we have our own resident rock musician!? One who may be able to make excellent use of these lyrics? Enter Undignified Obsession! Recently returned to us from the -gone and may not be coming back generation- here again and safe and well, if a little bit more controlled -giggles-

Permission to use these lyrics must first be obtained from Master, but, who knows? maybe Undiginified Obsessions band will elevate to new un-charted heights?!

Lewellynthedolphin · Post by **Lewellynthedolphin** » Thu Jul 07, 2005 5:53 pm

A tinsy bit morbid, but well written. I see some errors in them, but if it's written to be sung, it really wont matter. ^__^ Very angsty but it'd actually go down pretty well with a heavy bass-line, with a keyboard backing.... *ponders*

~Lewwy

Megami · Post by **Megami** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 10:48 am

thanks moocow

right now it's harrd for me to think so i will post another poem later

megami

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Mon Jul 25, 2005 8:37 am

Megami, it's ok if sometimes you're not inspired!

And I agree that maybe UO would be a good person to put music to Master's lyrics, that would be awesome!

As for me, I finally published my first chapter of my Arcana fic! I'm pretty pleased with it For those who don't know, it's angst-fluff with Az and caine, after the comic and summary end. Enjoy, and review please!

http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=544192457

~Sara

Damned · Post by **Damned** » Mon Aug 01, 2005 10:59 pm

*gasps* I'm finally non-lazy enough to post some poems that I've written over the last few weeks! The only problem is that I dun have them with me at present...so I'll post 'em later this arvo! Yay! *dances*

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:34 pm

Yay, poems! *dances*

Somebody read my story? Please? *whimpers*

!Sara

Damned · Post by **Damned** » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:38 pm

^.^ I'll read it *scampers off to read story*

Oh! Poetry! Here's some poems- yay!

The Forest

I groan inwardly and open my eyes,
Just a crack.
After the darkness and silence of my mind,
The outside world is bright,
Harsh
Noisy.

I feel like liquid,
My limbs are heavy,
And a pleasant fog has surrounded my mind,
Like a warm, protective blanket.

I want to go back to that place,
And stay there forever,
All on my own,
My solitary existence.

But I was jerked back,
To this world of hustle,
Of bustle and violence,
Of war, and hunger and poverty.

My mind cries in overwhelming sadness,
At the loss of something as comforting as that,
I want to return to that place,
Of silence and peace,
Where the birds sang and everyone was happy,

But I

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:31 am

Wow... those are some beautiful poems! The first reminds me a bit of something my friend Ayaka would write... Interesting... Anyway, I really get where you're coming from. Actually, I do with the other poems too... they're so full of emotion and beautiful!
I'd love to see more!

~Sara

Master killer · Post by **Master killer** » Thu Aug 04, 2005 1:23 am

They were cool deep as well

We

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Thu Aug 04, 2005 5:46 am

Jeez, Master, that's amazing... A different mood than the really depressing ones it seems... I like it a lot! *shivers*

~Sara

Dazza · Post by **Dazza** » Thu Aug 04, 2005 5:56 am

*Sneeks in and drops art links*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/Dazza/Catboy.jpg

Warning for nudeness and indesent posing o.o'
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/ ... nePose.jpg

Wallpaper
http://www.tegnebordet.dk/tegninger/8017/1122641673.jpg

*Nudges Pretty boy links and slips off again*

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Thu Aug 04, 2005 8:07 am

Eh... he is sexxxiiii! I love the colours too.

~Sara

Master killer · Post by **Master killer** » Sat Aug 06, 2005 12:41 am

I see your eye's in the devils mind
and i wish i could set you free
but your pausing and hesitating
has just about stopped me
i can not reach you now
cus i ceartainly belive
*semi hardcore*
that your
*semi hardcore*
*scream*
LOST
*scream*

Moo Cow · Post by **Moo Cow** » Sun Aug 07, 2005 10:46 am

Aaaah! Nice snippet of lyrics!

Master killer · Post by **Master killer** » Fri Aug 19, 2005 3:45 am

kk cool song might have been put on here befor ebut i think it is true in some respects

silhouettes above the cradle hold me down
they won't let me go the wrong way
my mother taught me all the fables, told me how
in the end all the sinners have to pay
but...

[Chorus:]
i don't wanna live like my mother
i don't wanna let fear rule my life
and i don't wanna live like my father
i don't wanna give up before i die

he worked so hard his bones are breaking
he wore them down but long ago he lost the feeling
his good intentions leave me shaking, show me how
i don't ever want to end up like he did
and...

[Chorus]

when i have kids
i won't put any chains on their wrists, i won't
i'll tell them this
there's nothing in this world that you can't be if you want it enough

[Chorus x2]