StarWarrior wrote:And tell me if I need to change Leiko a bit if she doesn't sound demonic enough.
narddude wrote:StarWarrior wrote:And tell me if I need to change Leiko a bit if she doesn't sound demonic enough.
Um ... yeah .... about your demon. She sounds too ... let's see how to put this ... sweet and innocent? Yes, those are the words. She doesn't sound like a demon you would really want to see dead. I mean, she's had such a tragic childhood. I feel sorry for her ... I don't wanna kill her.
So in short, make your demon evil as Hell. The eviler the better because then the readers would want to see them dead. Unless of course you're going for "the demon who is only evil because they never felt any real love" or something. In which case, yes, your demon sounds pretty good. But I don't think that kind of demon would suit this event very well.
Bryan Y B Wong wrote:Wow! This is great response! Now, if you still want more participants, I'm here to help. Notice on the current dropdown I have a little symbol that is linked to this year's Frickeen Cold Winter...Well, now that the event is pretty much finished, we can start advertising this event if you like (I haven't heard from Electron Blues about her events yet). We can make a miniature transparent GIF just like the FCW one, and have it link to this forum to get more participants. We can put it up for a few weeks.
So all I need is a some formal name for the event (doesn't have to be final, but as close as you can get for it)...I think Hallowkeen has been taken before, but call it whatever you want. Then we need to make a mini banner for it. I am more than willing to make this for you guys..I just need a name!
Good to see it going strong.
Shane B wrote:I like her. She's got this real angsty feel to her. As long as she's not all lovey-dovey she'll do fine. I picture her as a perfectionist, the one to go in and get the kill as quickly as possible to show that she's not some weak little momma's girl just cuz she hold's on to a necklace.
StarWarrior wrote:narddude and Leiko sitting in a treeEEEEEEE!!!! K I S S I N G!!!!!
narddude wrote:StarWarrior wrote:narddude and Leiko sitting in a treeEEEEEEE!!!! K I S S I N G!!!!!
Awwww yeah, mackin' it up with a demon lady. It don't get better than this. ^__^
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