The cartoon script

[Wazzlehog]

Well, I thought I'd go ahead and ask this. What's everyone really think of the cartoon script. I'm gonna' work on some more, and hopefully they won't be as flawed as the first. I mean, response I've already gotten is good, but this was written a while ago, and there's some parts of Gill's character I didn't get right. Also, an interesting note, when I wrote it, Klaw hadn't yet put Fallen Angel's name in the comic. I asked him what the name was, and either he made a typo, or I just read it wrong as Fallen Angle. I though it was just supposed to be a play on the term Fallen Angel... until I found out it actually was Fallen Angel.

Anyway, just tell me about your thoughts, and if you got any ideas for others, post them.

[Braki]

Heehee... yes, I was laughing at the Fallen Angel mistake. But it really is good.