ITH TOTQ fanfic ch 12

[Shyal_malkes]

this was way fun to write. it really was. maybe that's why it's done so quickly.

I came close again to revealing a major plot point that I want to save later on. part of me debated just letting it all spill out but I liked what I did with it.

if you can guess what that plot point is please don't ruin it for everyone else.

I really liked how I put in one line jokes that lightened the story from the heavyness it would otherwise take.

I also must warn you of a few things. I intentionally left a typo, it's suppsoed to be "meet" where I left it as "meat" and I'm hoping you'll be able to find it as funny as I did.

I also should warn you that due to death and some descriptions therein, I must rate this chapter a PG-13 one so be warned.

and I think that's all, here are the links.

<a href="http://www.geocities.com/shyal_malkes/black/TOTQ/TOTQ_fanfic_ch12.txt">chapter 12</a>
<a href="http://www.geocities.com/shyal_malkes/black/TOTQ/the_index.html">index</a>

here's hoping you guys enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

[The JAM]

Whoa, intense!! Glad they could get a break! Or, it seems like they are

[Shyal_malkes]

thanks

[Dapple]

Well that was thrilling. wonder what kind of weapons a luftship would have.

[Shyal_malkes]

well, it was a lot of fun writing it. I'm hoping that chapter 13 is just as fun.

tell me honestly, is my writing improving?

[Dapple]

Yes, the story is gripping, and the characters gane more personality and depth.

[Shyal_malkes]

thanks, part of the reason I started writing this was to improve my writing skills. nearly every webcomic or artist's site I visit has something saying how practice improves things.

[Shyal_malkes]

well, I've got good news, and then I've got bad news.

first the background. I had so much fun on chapters 11 and 12 that I totally forgot that I hadn't thoght out very much what to do for the next chapter afterwords. at first I thought I would have two more chapters before the end of part2 but upon organizing things I realized I would have to consolidate chapter 14 and 13 together into chapter 13

the good news is that I have organized the doings of chapter 13

the bad news of that is that since we will be going on vacation starting on the 3rd I won't be around a computer for a while so I won't be able to work on it very much.

secondly is another spot of bad news.

I have almost no ideas for the chapter 2 bloopers.

but I have a plan, during vacation anyone who has a bloopers joke or idea can e-mail me, while on vacation I'll try to think up some myself but when I get back I'll be checking the e-mails to see if anyone wrote, anyone writing will get full credit for the joke and idea.

the only requirements I have is that the jokes be clean, in gore, language etc. clean please or I cannot put them into the bloopers.

the last bit of good news is this,

part three is coming...