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well, I've finished the last entries of part 1 of the fanfiction

hopefully it won't be too badly recieved, I especially liked the funny barrier. this isn't the end of the fanfic. just the end of part 1.


<a href="http://www.geocities.com/shyal_malkes/b ... l">chapter 5</a>

<a href="http://www.geocities.com/shyal_malkes/b ... >something extra...</a>


well, now all I've gotta do is figure out how the blazes I'm gonna do chapter 6. that's a whole different set of challenges for me altogether.

and now I'm off to work, won't be back till around midnight.

Complete with bloopers!!! Great work, Shyal!!

Nice action seens, this Fanfic is coming along great.

Hope the next chapter will be done soon. Heh bringing the Mermitz into it. Grand Dad was a Mermit.

chapter 6 has me a bit worked up actually, kinda like quentyn was on the 23rd really. it's just that I have so little information on the direction that the chapter is going.

still, I am trying to get it done so I can move the main focus onto the min plot quickly enough. there are a lot of things I want to include into chapter 6 that if I don't lose some hair I'll be surprised (and dissappointed (sp?) too, I've got too much hair as it is )

that and coming up with an emberasing song is not one of my forte's

I just wanted to drop you a bit of encouragment, Shyal, that was really good =^^=

I definitely enjoyed the outtakes, although the first one nearly cost me my morning tea all over the keyboard!

I can just picture the scene having some subdued / peaceful music as the text is displayed...

That all comes to a screeching halt once the final line is displayed. Good one!

Patiently waits for next chapter....

Having finally gotten around to reading this just recently, I have to say that I look forward to seeing which direction it goes in.

Ok time for an update. I need insparation. For awhile now when I reeeealy get stressed out, I sort of retreat into the Questorvers, and semi cannon Fan fics, RPs. Well I'm not feeling the love. Maybe I should reread Between worlds from the begining for the fifth time.

I appreciate waiting for chapter 6, I know it's given me headaches just trying to type it. lets face it, I'm much better at doing fight scenes and plot points then, well that'd be telling.

the good news is that the story is 85-95% done already with just a few loose ends to tie up (and the main event to type which given the lack of info most of it is going to end up skipped and merely refered to in past tence)

I should make the admission now that I had hoped to avoid doing. but I edited (Changed) a minor point of chapter 5 to make room for a plot point in chapter 6. without which I would have lost my sanity especially since once I started with it the plot made total sense to me.

plus we finally get to see some of the villans.

when looking for inspiration I'll look into a number of old stuff I've gone over time and time again. like a scene I have planed far later in the story that was first based off of an old detective movie.

to get info about the questor universe I looked up all of Ralph's posts and paid attention to those made in the NPC forums, looking at the first few lines to see what the topic was and if it was likely to contain any usefull information.

and yeah, I'd read the between worlds story RP.

sorry I've been so late (Actually this is the first time I've ever felt on a kind of deadline for a mere hobby before eeeek!)

Well no rush, just like to know your still out there, progress updates do wonders to get the edge off.
Authors often do rewrites to a story for continuity perposes before publishing.