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About a couple of days ago, I embarked on a little story arc which involves Petey and Horse going to a monster truck show. It's still running today, with guest star Buck Spittoon, who has become one of the characters I've had the most fun writing to date. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.g ... echnically, the arc will end next Thursday (the 10). I would like your very honest opinions on the arc as of today, and then give me your full thoughts once its over next week. I myself am not completely satisfied with it, as I feel like lacks punch.<P>Anyhow, give me your thoughts about it. I'd appreciate it.<P>Case<P>------------------
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I liked the first day (what better way to
cure a broken heart?)<P>Didn't like yesterday's (fart jokes don't do
it for me. Not a matter of tastefulness for
me, they just don't strike me as funny).<P>Liked today's OK. I don't know that they
are lacking punch, but they don't feel as
fresh as some of your stuff. That is, you're
not stealing these jokes, but there are a
lot of jokes out there like them.<P>Overall, though, you've been really
consistent - the ones that aren't amazing
are still good.<P>Hate the phrase 'story arc.'<P>God Honest Opinion.
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Here comes <A HREF="http://boxjam.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>BoxJam's Doodle</A>!
Good ol' <A HREF="http://boxjam.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>BoxJam's Doodle</A>...Yes, sir!
There goes <A HREF="http://boxjam.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>BoxJam's Doodle</A>.<P>How I hate it.

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by BoxJam:
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Liked today's OK. I don't know that they
are lacking punch, but they don't feel as
fresh as some of your stuff. That is, you're
not stealing these jokes, but there are a
lot of jokes out there like them.
</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Thanks for the observation, Box-Pac. I think you hit the nail right on the head. You're right, I do feel like what I'm writing has been done before, and I guess that's what's getting to me.<P>Thanks for the insight.<P>Case<P>------------------
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Just keeping the topic fresh... the storyline ends today...<P>Case<P>------------------
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