Today's comic sucks cause I be all stupid, yo.

Today's comic sucks cause I be all stupid, yo.

Postby Yamcha Hibiki on Fri Jan 03, 2003 10:15 am

Neither the artwork or the writing was really all that bad in this installment. I just made a lot of stupid errors in each panel. >_< I miscolored Fusion's tail in panel 1, miscolered her dress in panel 2, forgot to draw her tail altogether on panels 3 and 4, and then on panel 5 I resized it wrong so it looks all stretchy and you can't really tell what Yaki is doing in the final panel (she's drooling). AURGH! I'm Yamcha, and I'm the biggest idiot ever. ;_;
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Postby HiRider on Fri Jan 03, 2003 2:07 pm

I could tell that Yaki was drooling.
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Postby Kirk on Fri Jan 03, 2003 7:51 pm

Me too :)
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Postby HiRider on Fri Jan 03, 2003 9:51 pm

Definatly makes things even more interesting.
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Postby Pokepony on Sat Jan 04, 2003 9:32 am

Gotta agree w/ HiRider & Kirk, I definitely saw droolin. ^-^
The comic looked good as usual to me
Also, jus have to add, I love the expression on Rummy's face in the last panel.
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Postby DUNOTS on Sun Jan 05, 2003 5:36 pm

Is this some kind of a gay thing?

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Postby AntiAntagonist on Sun Jan 05, 2003 11:05 pm

Wheee! I finally got back from vacation!

I don't think that there's anything that bad about this one, though I did get thrown off on which order 2&3 were supposed to come in (which I guess is due to the coloring of the dress in frame 2).

I like the last frame, but if you're really going to nitpick about it I don't think you should worry about correcting it, but it might look neat if Fusion was a little bit to the right, to leave some negative space. I also really like the 'curves springing from darkness' with Fusion's hair in the last frame.
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Postby MukiSama on Mon Jan 06, 2003 4:18 am

Wait, so is she just removing the x-mas outfit, or is that outfit REVERSIBLE?

Because having "Christmas Kitten" 'n "Hot Spandex Kitten" in the same outfit just might be too much for some people to handle =P
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Postby Yamcha Hibiki on Mon Jan 06, 2003 11:51 am

She's just removing the "X-mas" outfit. The spandex out fit was underneath it. I guess it's not as bad as I thought...
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