Wheee! I finally got back from vacation!
I don't think that there's anything that bad about this one, though I did get thrown off on which order 2&3 were supposed to come in (which I guess is due to the coloring of the dress in frame 2).
I like the last frame, but if you're really going to nitpick about it I don't think you should worry about correcting it, but it might look neat if Fusion was a little bit to the right, to leave some negative space. I also really like the 'curves springing from darkness' with Fusion's hair in the last frame.
As you go through life remember:
You will always get new friends and lose old friends, but it takes a special person to be your ultimate enemy!