Okay, so I'm sitting at my computer, I'm reading the fanfic sent to Zina on the ES sub-page, and I started thinking; **y'know, Zina says she wants to see more fanfics, and she's given us so many stories that are so cool... maybe I should give something back and write a fic of my own. I think I will. I want a cheese sandwich.** And so I started on one. But before I go and make a fool of myself, I'm going to put up a little of it here for some C&C. Fear the words, they have come for you!<P>THE STORY THUS FAR:<P>It was another cold day in Colorado. As usual, eight,
nine, and ten in the morning had come and gone with no
activity in the house. But when the clock struck
ten-thirty, all that changed to the tune of quick
Jance hurried into the living room, clicked on the TV,
and found a commercial on the channel he flipped to.
Relieved, he quickly dashed into the kitchen,
returning in a moment with a pack of pop-tarts and a
smile on his face. He sat patiently as the TV flooded
the room with images of deodorants and weight-loss,
munching the first of his two pastries and hardly
tasting it. He had been waiting weeks for the last
episode in the mini-series, and he was happy as a clam
that the day had finally come.
One could then imagine his disappointment when the TV