Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby LibertyCabbage on Thu Dec 05, 2013 8:24 am

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Felt pretty good. Maybe possibly work on actual comic pages coming in the near future.
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby RobboAKAscooby on Sat Dec 14, 2013 7:27 am

Main cast of my comic.
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Dr Legostar on Sat Dec 14, 2013 3:19 pm

RobboAKAscooby wrote:Main cast of my comic.
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L to R: Dawn, Seth, Ash, Alex, Dusk the sheepdog, Crystal


Dawn reminds me of Daphne from Scooby Doo. You know, if she'd had turquoise hair.
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby RobboAKAscooby on Sun Dec 15, 2013 12:19 am

Dr Legostar wrote:
RobboAKAscooby wrote:Main cast of my comic.
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L to R: Dawn, Seth, Ash, Alex, Dusk the sheepdog, Crystal


Dawn reminds me of Daphne from Scooby Doo. You know, if she'd had turquoise hair.


Cool! I did kind of borrow her hairstyle so I guess that came across.
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Postby Peripheral Descent on Sun Dec 15, 2013 3:57 pm

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My lineart is nice and clean because I'm using the pen tool, and now my perspectives are starting to look better. But I feel some of the character of the drawings are lost. I hope I can learn to colour awesome to make up for it. >.>
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby VeryCuddlyCornpone on Sun Dec 15, 2013 4:10 pm

I think it looks too rigid and sterile. A suggestion I've seen from other artists is to make those really straight, obviously "perfect" lines like what you have here, and then trace over them on a new layer, after which point you can get rid of the "perfect" layer. This way your lines will still be "correct" so much as they're following the general computerized lines, but with enough flaws/imperfections that it retains character without looking sloppy.
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Peripheral Descent on Sun Dec 15, 2013 7:50 pm

VeryCuddlyCornpone wrote:I think it looks too rigid and sterile. A suggestion I've seen from other artists is to make those really straight, obviously "perfect" lines like what you have here, and then trace over them on a new layer, after which point you can get rid of the "perfect" layer. This way your lines will still be "correct" so much as they're following the general computerized lines, but with enough flaws/imperfections that it retains character without looking sloppy.


That's actually a great idea. It's such a simple fix too, so I'm totally trying that for my next page. Thank you!
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby VeryCuddlyCornpone on Mon Dec 16, 2013 11:59 am

Happy to help!!
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby MariaAndMichelle on Tue Dec 17, 2013 6:48 am

Dr Legostar wrote:
RobboAKAscooby wrote:Main cast of my comic.
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L to R: Dawn, Seth, Ash, Alex, Dusk the sheepdog, Crystal


Dawn reminds me of Daphne from Scooby Doo. You know, if she'd had turquoise hair.

Crystal and Dusk remind us of Ariel and Max (Prince Eric's dog). XD XD
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby RobboAKAscooby on Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:37 pm

MariaAndMichelle wrote:
Dr Legostar wrote:
RobboAKAscooby wrote:Main cast of my comic.
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L to R: Dawn, Seth, Ash, Alex, Dusk the sheepdog, Crystal


Dawn reminds me of Daphne from Scooby Doo. You know, if she'd had turquoise hair.

Crystal and Dusk remind us of Ariel and Max (Prince Eric's dog). XD XD


What can I say I watch a lot of cartoons...

Alex's hair (which I screwed up in this pic) is normally a sort of wild/loose version of Belle's... just getting in before anyone else mentions it
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby RobboAKAscooby on Tue Dec 17, 2013 1:47 pm

Since we're on the topic of Disney, here's a couple from my dA account:
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Humbug on Fri Dec 20, 2013 12:54 am

Now that I have some spare time on my plate, I can get started on a cast page for ToP. I will be drawing the characters in a series of cards. So I'm starting off with the main antagonist. I will be adding colour over the weekend. :)

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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Dr Legostar on Fri Dec 20, 2013 3:53 am

Humbug wrote:Now that I have some spare time on my plate, I can get started on a cast page for ToP. I will be drawing the characters in a series of cards. So I'm starting off with the main antagonist. I will be adding colour over the weekend. :)

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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Humbug on Fri Dec 20, 2013 6:33 am

Yummy yummy abs. XD
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby MariaAndMichelle on Fri Dec 20, 2013 6:49 am

Humbug cooks up the best beefcake. :D :D
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Warren on Fri Dec 20, 2013 7:23 am

That's pretty representative of what my abs look like too.

You know, just so you ladies know.

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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Dr Legostar on Fri Dec 20, 2013 7:29 am

Warren wrote:That's pretty representative of what my abs look like too.

You know, just so you ladies know.

*whistles innocently*


That makes sense, I figured your abs looked like they were drawn on.
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby MariaAndMichelle on Fri Dec 20, 2013 6:59 pm

:lol: :lol:
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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Ti-Phil on Mon Dec 23, 2013 2:57 pm

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Re: Doodles 12: Just like clockwork.

Postby Sortelli on Mon Dec 23, 2013 4:54 pm

oh man I miss Lucky Luke and the Dalton Gang
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