Killbert-Robby wrote:Unfortunately the waiting list to go down on him is already like a year long, but if you're patient...
Redtech wrote:Killbert-Robby wrote:Unfortunately the waiting list to go down on him is already like a year long, but if you're patient...
Jekkal wrote:Redtech wrote:Killbert-Robby wrote:Unfortunately the waiting list to go down on him is already like a year long, but if you're patient...
No, the line for THAT is two years long.
... Make sure to bring protection.
VeryCuddlyCornpone wrote:Toreador- FURBY????? *brain explodes with nostalgia* That makes me want to look at the rest of your site now.
ETA: Not to impose on Serge's turf but my my my the typos!! Proofreading is your buddy! Otherwise looking decent for a young infant.
(I'm saying your site is an infant, not that you yourself are one)
SergeXIII wrote:Okay, heres another one. Remember, I'm working off a computer I don't have much time to use as my laptop is busted, so this is not going to be up to the level of past reviews, I'll just have to issue rainchecks for when I can give it my all:
SergeXIII wrote:Shit Happens
Shit Happens is the tale of a band of chronically displaced friends, loosing their homes via gambling, misfortune, or explosions and hunting for a new one. That’s pretty much it, its day in the life of gag strip. I honestly can’t say I enjoyed the writing of this particular comic. It isn’t bad, it just isn’t particularly entertaining.
SergeXIII wrote:The jokes aren’t funny, I know that stings but its true, not only did I not laugh at a single joke almost all of them made little to no sense to me in a comedic fashion. Because of this I assume that these jokes are derived from inside material (which is a major no, no) or wasn’t tested on other people.
SergeXIII wrote: Since this is a gag comic, it deals a major blow to the plot related momentum of the comic.
SergeXIII wrote:The other factor in this assessment is the cast, and I found disappointment here as well. The cast of Shit Happens are never introduced and are hardly ever alone, and as a result are severely under developed, with only one member having any unique qualities: he’s a quirky inventor (an internet cliché). Its hard to give a shit about the cast or humor of Shit Happens, so this is a definite area for improvement.
SergeXIII wrote:If I had to describe the Art of Shit Happens in one word it would be Stiff. The cast have a very small array of poses in their arsenal and will very seldomly switch things up. You’ll usually see people from the shoulders up, facing front, smiling which is quite frankly boring and not always appropriate. For instance check out this panel where a man elbows a shark in the face. Do you see any power behind that hit? Why is he smiling? Relying on one pose is a rookie move and for a year old comic this is no longer acceptable. We see the same perspective, characters almost never move their heads or legs, and anatomy, while usually passable, is not always consistent and has its share of common flaws like tiny hands.
about six time this year although I have used a 3/4 view variant quite a bit for conversational stuff.shoulders up, facing front, smiling
SergeXIII wrote:A final complaint: the inventor character looks like a girl, and I can not get over it. It isn’t only the long purple hair either (which looks a bit familiar, no doubt contributing to this observation), he has some feminine facial features in comparison with the rest of the cast. While an ugly one, I think he could pass for a woman if you threw some boobs on there.
SergeXIII wrote:There’s also the lack of line variation. I see myself harping on that to everyone though, so don’t sweat it. On the plus side the coloring of Shit Happens is completely traditional and is pulled off very decently, which is saying something in the days of photoshop.
SergeXIII wrote:Unfortunately I cannot make this review a positive one. Shit Happens feels like a “I’m bored, lets make a webcomic affair” in that its cast, world, premise and writing seems to lack serious and devoted thought. I’m sure you could turn this around if you tested out some humor on some other people for feedback and focused on some character development, but as of right now Shit Happens doesn’t have much going for it.
Perdire wrote:*Serge and Scooby said stuff*
An honest review is well received on the internet!? I think you've renewed my faith in humanity.
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