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Yes, i'm up to issue #4 of about 40 written so far of my new funny panel cartoon. Check it out, pleaaase, I swear to god it's funny. It's about a lad named Trevor and his zany adventures.

http://trevorissmall.keenspace.com

And tell me what ya think! I'm gonna have more stuff up soon on the website, but for now it's just the comic. Much love to ya all!!!

The Chicken

Praise-- check.
Encouragement-- check.
Noodling-- check.

Enjoyed the scribbly fella's dialogue.... Shades of Sinfest. Not derivative in any sense; pleasantly off-the-cuff & naturalistic.
One thing I'd enjoy seeing is a continuation of the scribbly, as with the logo. The scratchboard feel of the logo & character would be interesting if carried over into the coloring. I rather like smudged & rough artwork; it's something I'm not terribly good at, although I admire it a great deal. Can't pull if off myself.
One nudge I'll give you: try out a number of different settings & scenarios for a while. Play around, see where you go.