Plus it's from LibertyCabbage, who's comics are usually about sentient fruit that violently murders people in the name of anarchy. Not the sort of guy who's concerned about stepping on any toes. Hell, if he didn't insult your comic I would have assumed someone had stolen his screen name.
In my opinion, the 3 keys to a good review - be objective, be honest, be respectful.
And if you are a sandpaper critic, don't be suprised if your reviewees emotions are a little bit excoriated. And though they shouldn't, the reviewee could simply disregard an abrasive review altogether instead of learning from it, which (presumably) defeats the point of the review. Even if they do learn from it, it'll take longer, because first they have to recover from the blow to their pride before they can return to the review to read it subjectively.

McDuffies wrote:that sorta-drama with Flying Tigers review
McDuffies wrote:Why, I remember how many comics I've reviewed, whose authors quit webcomics months or years after I reviewed it.
RobboAKAscooby wrote:I am feeling less happy with myself about that whole deal as time goes on.....but in the end things got worked out and I've learned a few things (plus she has pj pants now).

robotthepirate wrote:And if you are a sandpaper critic, don't be suprised if your reviewees emotions are a little bit excoriated. And though they shouldn't, the reviewee could simply disregard an abrasive review altogether instead of learning from it, which (presumably) defeats the point of the review. Even if they do learn from it, it'll take longer, because first they have to recover from the blow to their pride before they can return to the review to read it subjectively.
McDuffies wrote:I guess I will join the choir and say that anyone asking LC for review should read a few of his reviews before asking for one. He was just coming off from that sorta-drama with Flying Tigers review, and that should have been a clue to what could happen to Peter's comic.
McDuffies wrote:I dunno if Peter missed that part or just disregarded it, but I think that LC said a few things he needed to hear. Peter has a lot of real-life things stopping him from doing a comic more seriously, for sure. At the same time he talks about promoting his comic or complains about his comic not being read more than most of people around. I think he indeed is serious about his comic, so what LC said is a very useful message. It is not "get these things straight of you are a bad person" - it is "get these things straight, then start thinking about how you promote it".
Too bad that Peter seems to skirt around LC's points, kinda refuses to deal with them. But that's ok, I think that most of reviews don't work immediately, but rather sink in with time. Why, I remember how many comics I've reviewed, whose authors quit webcomics months or years after I reviewed it.
McDuffies wrote:LC was a lot younger then, though. Enough for a person to change upside down.
McDuffies wrote:One thing is sure though, he's taken a lot of terribly harsh reviews in his life and he knows more than anyone what it's like to be on the other side of the monitor, Junior.
McDuffies wrote:The other way of self-protection would be keeping a low profile, but that means never getting a lot of readers.
RobboAKAscooby wrote:I am feeling less happy with myself about that whole deal as time goes on.....but in the end things got worked out and I've learned a few things (plus she has pj pants now).
McDuffies wrote:If I was to stay away from every place where I made an embarrassing tantrum, I would be banned from internet.
LibertyCabbage wrote:In peter's case, since he wrote he intends to go pro someday, I'm actually sorta glad he's getting this stuff outta the way now, since he has to be mentally prepared to get rejected by publishers. Getting a letter in the mail that says, "Thanks for sending us your work, but we're not ready to sign you now. Sorry," is polite in tone, but it's still hard to deal with. And this isn't a dig at peter -- we've all heard stories about so-and-so genius writer getting rejected so many times before they got published.
I get the impression sometimes that more than half the webcomics out there are crappy sprite or stick-figure comics. They just don't promote themselves at all or even post on webcomics forums, so they're basically invisible.

LibertyCabbage wrote:McDuffies wrote:LC was a lot younger then, though. Enough for a person to change upside down.
I laugh at my old stuff too, now, for being so trashy, so I don't mind, although if it matters to anyone, nothing I've written in the past five years or so has been at all like my webcomics. The irony, of course, is that I used to show off my trashy writing all the time in my webcomics, but now that I've matured a bit, I'm much less prolific and much more private. Well, I guess aside from this whole reviewing spree.
IVstudios wrote:I think I should clarify that I didn't mean what I said about your old stuff as an insult. I just brought it up to point out that you have a reputation as someone who's not afraid to offend people.

IVstudios wrote:LibertyCabbage wrote:McDuffies wrote:LC was a lot younger then, though. Enough for a person to change upside down.
I laugh at my old stuff too, now, for being so trashy, so I don't mind, although if it matters to anyone, nothing I've written in the past five years or so has been at all like my webcomics. The irony, of course, is that I used to show off my trashy writing all the time in my webcomics, but now that I've matured a bit, I'm much less prolific and much more private. Well, I guess aside from this whole reviewing spree.
I think I should clarify that I didn't mean what I said about your old stuff as an insult. I just brought it up to point out that you have a reputation as someone who's not afraid to offend people.
robotthepirate wrote:Mate, you deserve a clip round the head just for asking that guy to review Critters. I wouldn't take too much to heart from someone who sees having an irregular or infrequent update schedule as a capital offense. ETC.
McDuffies wrote:Well may not be a capital offense but it is an issue that every review in the world would touch. Not having enough time to make it more regularly is perfectly understandable as noone sane would ask you to, say, cut down the time you spend with your kids to draw a comic. But the price to pay is that it's very unlikely for an irregularly updated comic to amass a regular audience, and it's also very difficult to keep an audience, even when a huge webcomic starts skipping updates, audience starts crumbling. It's not something that should make you neglect your day job or duties, it's simply something that Peter should have in mind in regards to his expectations from his comic.
robotthepirate wrote:Very true. But there's ways of saying that nicely.
In the same way that while its understandable to get annoyed with you neighbours' dog messing on your lawn, there's a difference between a polite note and setting bear traps. One way leads to a better behaved dog and the other potentially leads to one less dog.
VeryCuddlyCornpone wrote:Aye, IV, which is why I mentioned either in this thread or in some other one that you should know a bit about the person reviewing your comic if that's possible.
LibertyCabbage wrote:You shouldn't be getting this upset about what a random person writes on the Internet, though. And while this kind of reaction doesn't bother me personally, I think a lot of people would be more reluctant to give you criticism after reading something like this, which hurts your comic in the long run.
LibertyCabbage wrote:Actually, I think peter should be praised for having the courage to submit his webcomic for review.
LibertyCabbage wrote:Some of my reviews have definitely been negative, but I think calling my review "an orgasm of hatred" and etc. is a little ridiculous.

McDuffies wrote:I guess I will join the choir and say that anyone asking LC for review should read a few of his reviews before asking for one. He was just coming off from that sorta-drama with Flying Tigers review, and that should have been a clue to what could happen to Peter's comic.
McDuffies wrote:I dunno if Peter missed that part or just disregarded it, but I think that LC said a few things he needed to hear. Peter has a lot of real-life things stopping him from doing a comic more seriously, for sure. At the same time he talks about promoting his comic or complains about his comic not being read more than most of people around. I think he indeed is serious about his comic, so what LC said is a very useful message. It is not "get these things straight of you are a bad person" - it is "get these things straight, then start thinking about how you promote it".
Too bad that Peter seems to skirt around LC's points, kinda refuses to deal with them. But that's ok, I think that most of reviews don't work immediately, but rather sink in with time. Why, I remember how many comics I've reviewed, whose authors quit webcomics months or years after I reviewed it.
McDuffies wrote:LC was a lot younger then, though. Enough for a person to change upside down. One thing is sure though, he's taken a lot of terribly harsh reviews in his life and he knows more than anyone what it's like to be on the other side of the monitor,

peterabnny wrote:robotthepirate wrote:Very true. But there's ways of saying that nicely.
In the same way that while its understandable to get annoyed with you neighbours' dog messing on your lawn, there's a difference between a polite note and setting bear traps. One way leads to a better behaved dog and the other potentially leads to one less dog.
*DING!DING!DING!DING!DING!* And we have a winner!

peterabnny wrote:I know - you're absoutely right. If I'd been smarter about it and had read through the other reviews I wouldn't have submitted my comic for review. When he said that he could've written a lot more negative stuff about Scooby's comic and that he's not doing it to help the creator, that should have been a banner-sized red flag that a Critters review wasn't going to end well. But yet I was too overeager, and paid for it as a result. Once bitten, definitely twice shy.
peterabnny wrote:FWIW, I track the traffic going to my site and there is a definite bell curve every month, with the highest activity at the beginning of the month, tapering off in the middle, and then picking up again at the end. That tells me that people who follow me know when to look for new stuff, and I feel the pressure to stick to my schedule to make it worthwhile for them. Yeah, I have missed a deadline and have lost some of my audience as a result, but it seems like they come back eventually as long as I keep to schedule.
peterabnny wrote:Not only do I feel the pinch to keep on schedule, but having a monthly comic gives me a lot less room for gags that don't work or miss their mark. If mine was a daily - or even weekly, for that matter - one bad comic wouldn't matter that much; I'd simply write it off and get 'em soon with the next one. With a monthly, it's a long time till the next update, so every single cartoon has to fire on all cylinders and hit its mark.
peterabnny wrote:Although it may not show here, I can take being told I suck. What hurt was the douchebag way I felt LC went about it. I've had people give me negative feedback, but the tone was never this negative and they offered examples of why something didn't work as well as examples of what did work. That is what I look for. If I reacted poorly, it was because I felt that I was being treated poorly. As did Schooby. As would anyone who suddenly felt like their pride and joy (and, indirectly, themselves as well) was under assault. In a case like this, if a reviewer had positive things to say, but still came across as a real douche with everything else, the positive stuff becomes lost on the creator among all the other douchebaggery.
peterabnny wrote:Indeed, and going forward I'll be sure and be far more selective about who I accept review offers from....
peterabnny wrote:Well, as others have said, here's a right way and there's a wrong way to criticize someone. With me, it's give respect, get respect, as I'm sure it is with most people on and off the net. I just wished like hell I knew your bias against newspaper comics before I said anything!
peterabnny wrote:I don't think "courage" would be the right word I'd use. I was thinking more like "total dumbass."
peterabnny wrote:In my mind it's no less rediculous than some of your original assertions.
McDuffies wrote:Eh, Peter, I would like to direct you to "Your comic is bad and you should feel bad" blog, but it is removed from internet now, probably due to all the hostile reactions it's author was getting.
peterabnny wrote:Don't get me wrong. I share Schooby's opinion that a creator can learn from even a terrible review like I got, and FWIW I did get some things out of it to help me improve. My thing, tho, is that it shouldn't have to be this hard - or painful.
peterabnny wrote:Again, it's not what things were said as much as the way they were said. But I also agree with you that it may take some time for this review to work. It still is even now.
peterabnny wrote:To that end, I saw LC's latest response and if I may be allowed to respond in this thread, let me say thank you, LC! THAT'S how you get me to resonate with your message - by being civil and constructive, not all this sucks and that sucks, and this is alright, but it kinda sucks, too. I only tend to be as defensive as other people are offensive.
peterabnny wrote:That's what I find so damned puzzling. If he knows what it's like to have gotten such harsh reviews, why on earth is he so cavalier about giving the same to others?? He of all people should know the power of words - and their consequences!
IVstudios & McDuffies wrote:stuff
RobboAKAscooby wrote:Now if I was clever I would use the extra time I'll have to concentrate on improving Flying Tigers or practicing my drawing, but there's another idea that's been rattling around inside my head so I may give into temptation on that - I can if I'm motivated get four pages a week done so 2 pages per comic could be doable.
IVstudios wrote:There are three things you can do with a review like this:
2. Recognize that beneath the mean tone are some legitamate points and use your anger as motivation to do better. (This, do this one)

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