Perdire wrote:Perdire is a Sci-Fi/Space Opera based webcomic run by myself and two friends. It differs from most other webcomics mainly in the fact that it is non-comedic, but more akin to traditional comics.
Heh. That description sounds rather a lot like my own comic, above.
Please take a look and tell me what you think.
Buuuuuuuut taking a look at it, I think we're headed in radically different directions. Granted, it's hard to tell from three comics, one of which appears to be a title page of sorts, but mood-wise, they're quite different and they start in quite different places.
For a more specific critique, the art's not bad at all. A fair amount of detail, decent coloration, you can actually tell what things are...
Storywise, tho...well, I bet a lot of people will enjoy, but it's clearly not gonna be my thing. Oh, the premise doesn't sound bad--very
Battlastar Galactica--but I tend to prefer my fiction rather more, um...happy? I'm shying away from the word 'angst', here, but that's the one that suggests itself first, given the opening narration and much of the look. I mean, if we take the
Battlestar Galactica thing as an analogy, I think my own comic is more like the original series, while yours is more like the re-make; not a perfect comparison, but I think you get idea.
Granted, I may be wrong after so few strips, but...that's my first impression.
Anyway, well done; glad to see someone else going for "graphic novel" rather than "comic strip" as well as sci-fi.

Cheers!