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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby Kittyboymuffin on Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:54 pm

What was the story and the twist (and the untwist)? :o

Also, I may have mentioned this before, but: many times, in blackmail stories, the blackmailee is blackmailed into doing much worse things than the actual results of the original blackmail material getting out. I'm almost tempted to deconstruct this by making it something really silly (i.e. "Hah! I have a video showing that you have violated your principles by watching dubbed anime instead of restricting yourself to subtitles only! Degrade yourself for me!")
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby Halo299 on Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:51 am

Kittyboymuffin wrote:What was the story and the twist (and the untwist)? :o

Also, I may have mentioned this before, but: many times, in blackmail stories, the blackmailee is blackmailed into doing much worse things than the actual results of the original blackmail material getting out. I'm almost tempted to deconstruct this by making it something really silly (i.e. "Hah! I have a video showing that you have violated your principles by watching dubbed anime instead of restricting yourself to subtitles only! Degrade yourself for me!")


"Degrade yourself for me!" would go down as one of the most epic lines in literature.

the story i was talking about was something i read on the internet. A husband/wife have to go to a sleazy banker to get a loan to save their house, knowing full well that this guy is going to molest the wife. So they get there, tell him what they need, he molests the wife for a bit and then tells them that if they want his help the wife is going to belong to him sexually for the duration of the loan. So far so good, nothing special.

but then, once the couple get home. it is reviled that the whole thing was really the husbands idea because he wanted a chance to live out his cuckold fantasies. The two have a good laugh about it, and the story ends with the husband looking at his wife's vagina. A nice twist and i was happy to see that the writer had gone this rout because normally writers of these things just get gratuitous in their attempts to make things as bad for the main characters as possible.

BUT THEN!!!! Turns out the banker had bugged their house and overheard the conversation and swears to take his dull and unimaginative revenge on them by making things as gratuitously bad for them as possible.
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby Aeridus on Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:43 am

That's... a rather dull twist. o_O
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby TurielD on Fri Feb 05, 2010 6:47 pm

The single best writer of BDSM stories that I've found over the last few years is Kenna. I absolutely adore her work... I'm personally especially fond of the lolita bondage, which she's most prolific on so I'm probably biased with that being my kink.

Nevertheless, I'd like to recommend to you all who have read anything like this to read "True life, no Really", which I think is an incredibly well pulled-off mindfuck, so many inversions of cliches and tropes... its a self-referential parody of typical stories of its genre, pointing out a lot of the traps that these stories fall in to. It's 51 pages long, so here's a little excerpt:

With daddy fresh from fucking Heidi, Leah came over to daddy. She was ready to try a really big cock. His cock was as big around as Leah’s forearm and even longer. Luckily, his cock was still slick with a mixture of his and Heidi’s cum. “No way is that going where I think you think it’s going,” said daddy as she spread her legs before him. “You’re still a virgin and that won’t fit.”

“Don’t worry, daddy, baby won’t hurt you,” said Leah. She desperately wanted to feel that big cock inside her tight pussy. Ever so gently she scooted forward to put his cock to the entrance to her 8-year-old pussy. The head of his cock pushed past the plump pussy lips, but it looked like trying to fit a steam powered locomotive through a garden hose.

“Oww, ooo,” moaned daddy as he pushed the head of his cock into her virgin love tunnel. “I love you, baby,” he said tentatively, wanting to make her feel better despite his moans of pain. Gradually he worked the head of his cock between her lips and started into that tight hole. As he worked at it, Leah’s pussy stretched, letting him put the head of his cock in. Then he felt suction, as if she was drawing him into her. She was in control.

“I know, daddy,” said Leah as he worked his cock inside her. “And baby loves you, too. You’re being so brave. It might hurt at first, but you’ll see. Once it gets inside me, it will start to feel good.”

“OK, baby,” said Carl, fighting back tears as his cock pushed three inches into her cunt. “Oh, it really hurts, baby,” he said. “But, here it comes, I’m going to put it all the way in you. Let’s get it over with, OK, baby. I want it to start feeling good.”

“That’s my daddy,” said baby. She sucked his cock a little deeper into the incredibly tight space between her thighs. It felt wonderful. She’d never experienced anything like it before. She felt like she was a warm, wet, velvety rock crushing machine with a conveyor belt feeding her what she needed. Before she knew it, she had three inches of his cock buried in her.
“Go for it, baby, I can take it all,” said daddy.

Hearing those words of encouragement, Leah sucked the rest of his cock inside her in one mighty stroke. “You’re all the way in!” she exulted. “You did it.” She hadn’t been sure that it would really fit in such a tight space.

“Oh, baby, baby, it hurts too much. Push it out, push it out. I can’t stand it. It’s not feeling better like you promised. I’m going to implode. Please, get it out, baby.”

“Don’t worry, daddy, it will start to feel good pretty soon.” It didn’t bother her that she had a giant cock inside her. In fact, it felt pretty neat.

“No, it won’t!” squealed the big man, his voice two octaves higher. “Oh, it’s stuck, I can’t get it out. Get it out NOW!”

“OK, daddy, baby’s so sorry. I’m squeezing it out now, OK?”


And even this manages to be erotic most of the time.

She's got one 'secret society' story like the ones previously mentioned in the thread, called "Triple fun"; judge for yourself if she pulls it off without it seeming terribad XD
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby ManaUser on Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:15 pm

Oh my.

P.S. I do wish people would stop publishing porn in doc format. HTML or text are so much more versatile. Plus I don't necessarily want the phrase "lolita bondage" appearing in my recent documents.
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby Churba on Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:34 pm

ManaUser wrote:Oh my.
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Re: a rant about kinky stories

Postby TurielD on Sat Feb 06, 2010 3:21 am

ManaUser wrote:Oh my.

P.S. I do wish people would stop publishing porn in doc format. HTML or text are so much more versatile. Plus I don't necessarily want the phrase "lolita bondage" appearing in my recent documents.


Indeed, seems to be a bit of a tossup on ASSTR most of the time - but you can of course just rename it and open up another bunch of documents to make it drop off the list, that's what I do :lol:
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