The Pooki-meister is here!

[Pooki]

Why am I here? I think I've become the 'self proclaimed manga-how-to' guy, which is strange because my manga needs as much help as it can get.

Anyhow, I guess one reason why I'm here is because I hear your cry for feedback. You probably read what I wrote on mr. SoC's forum, and the same applies for you. I've found a bit of time nowadays, and I really want to help. (Also, I think if I involve myself in your guy's stuff, maybe you'll do the same for me... hint hint) Anyhow, so I'll try my best to comment/critique on things (that last parenthetical message was subliminal by the way, ignore it!) and as I said before, anything I say is probably utter foolishness and should be taken with a bucket of the dead sea (which has the highest salinity of any other body of water i think) (also, any parenthetical message, such as this, is a subliminal explanation, ignore them all, especially this one)

Ohh... how're you doing on those lyrics?

[AnimeCanuck]

Hi!
Thanks for visiting me! Yes, the Dead Sea does have the highest level of salt in the world! And.. too bad! I've noticed all of your subliminal messages.. and I will just <i>have</i> to go read your comic now!

(actually.. I've been thinking about it for a few days.. just haven't gone yet!)

Ermm.. and the lyrics.. I am still yet to listen to the tune... ....
Sorry!!!! I'm SOOOO bad!
I'll listen to it tomorrow, okay!?
And maybe I'll come up with stuff right away.... and maybe not.
We'll see.

And anyways.. WHAT KIND OF FEEDBACK IS THIS!? It has NOTHING to do with my comic or art in anyway! You're crazy!!!! (heh.. not really.. just ignore that.. that was um.. ... bad.. bad.. My evil twin?? Yeah.. that's it.. Er.. what I meant is.. .. Well.. what I said.. except the part about you being crazy.. you're not crazy.. I'm the one that's crazy.. especially since I'm just rambling now.. *ramble ramble ramble*)

ACK! Sorry about that.. *sweatdrop*

I haven't had enough sugar today.. And I still have homework to do... I hate homework..

See you later, Koio!! And once again, thanks for dropping by!! ^_^

-AC

[AnimeCanuck]

HEY!!!!!
I'm reading your "Rain" er.. Akurui manga right now! Its neat!

Hehe! You have SoC, Rohan Hill, and Pelolos in there!!!! But you didn't give Bryan credit to Pelolos, I notice.

Heheh. Well. I'm going to continue with the next page or two! ^^

Its really cool so far!
Oh yeah.. and what does "Mata ne?" mean?

^_^

Ja!

-AC

[Pooki]

mata just literally means 'again'. I know she says "Ja! Mata Ne!" but it's actually the phrase 'ja mata ne' which is 'see you later' or 'talk to you later' or whatever. Anyhow, I WAS going to critique and comment on your work, (i actually wrote quite abit, well, not as much as Bryan did!) but everything I was about to say, you improved on recently. So... seeing that you're constantly improving, why should I critique/comment on old material? We'd both really be better off with a fresh sample of your work... unless, you want comments on the leprechaun (spelling!?) picture? That is recent right? And oh, I tried to follow those links at the bottom to go to the rest of the images, and they're not working...

[AnimeCanuck]

Yes! You can critique the Leprechaun! (and you spelt it right, too! Kudos! ^^)

Those pictures don't work? Welll... They do for me.. But maybe because they're already on my computer.. Its probably because they're really large files.. The LAST one should work at least, though.. I tried it at my friend's house!

That's frustrating to know!
... Dang it!


Ermmmmm.... Yeah... Um..
Well.. I will probably have up a new strip (YAY!!!!! and.. FINALLY!!!!) on Wednessday! So.. you can critique that (which is actually over 2 weeks old.. maybe even a month old.. parts of it 2 months old!) then.

Yeah.. Pretty sad.. isn't it? Oh well.. I drew an entirely new strip yesterday. And that's not half bad.. Considering half of it is text!!!!

Oh yeah! and one more thing! I read the first 2 or 3 strips of Pooki also..

ITS SOO CUTE!!!! ( and funny! There was SO much wit packed into the FIRST strip! )

I'll keep reading it when I have spare time!

See ya! ^_~

-AC