Why am I here? I think I've become the 'self proclaimed manga-how-to' guy, which is strange because my manga needs as much help as it can get.
Anyhow, I guess one reason why I'm here is because I hear your cry for feedback. You probably read what I wrote on mr. SoC's forum, and the same applies for you. I've found a bit of time nowadays, and I really want to help. (Also, I think if I involve myself in your guy's stuff, maybe you'll do the same for me... hint hint) Anyhow, so I'll try my best to comment/critique on things (that last parenthetical message was subliminal by the way, ignore it!) and as I said before, anything I say is probably utter foolishness and should be taken with a bucket of the dead sea (which has the highest salinity of any other body of water i think) (also, any parenthetical message, such as this, is a subliminal explanation, ignore them all, especially this one)
Ohh... how're you doing on those lyrics?