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Postby ~Dragoness~ on Sat Sep 29, 2001 9:37 am

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by harleq:
<B>is that so? what words did i repeat? i'd like an example, plz. oh yes, that's rite. there isn't one, beacuse i don't.<P>pfft. u should be so lucky to get feedback from clever liddoe me.<P>and i suppose you think that writing is better than mine? well, how truly sorry, but i dont think so. first-person is hard to do, not to mention tedious to read, and although you do it well, it's hard to be succesful with something like that. why don't u post it up at ipublish, and well see if you get 4-stars, huh? then we'll see who's da (wo)man.<P>why not write in slang? everyone does. it's faster than writing formally.</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Good lord, Harleq, you are really a two year old, aren't you? I wouldn't go around saying <I> rite </I> and spelling it like that. One thing that ALL WRITERS SHOULD LEARN is how to SPELL PROPERLY and CORRECTLY. Now there, you write interent abbreviations and claim you drew this and wrote that. I do NOT believe you have drawn those pictures, they came from a game I'll suppose. <P>And I do not understand your intentions around here, because everyone, it seems this GUY here just wants some attention probably because of HIS previous past. Harleq, go to the Red Cross and check yourself in for a talk with one of those people. You MUST ajust your attitude, and your brain, and your life. I can see your future. Ppppffffffffffttttt.... Nothing like it, nothing there. Stigma. Poor Harleq, he is dishonored and dismayed. I do NOT CARE how much you hate this story and want to spread that word, but I do care for people that make mistakes. So far you have done many of them. Spelling mistakes, improper grammar and punctuation, thinking that AC is a wannabe canadian, and for not liking this comic. Guess what? #@$^ YOU!<P><p>[This message has been edited by AnimeCanuck (edited 09-30-2001).]
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Sat Sep 29, 2001 10:40 am

harleq, harleq, harleq...<P> When will you ever learn? If you are truly a "great writer" as you call yourself, you wouldn't be opposed to writing properly at all times, but you would be after others to join you in doing so, as well.
For me, writing properly is just as quick as writing improperly, and in some cases, faster. Maybe you just have poor typing skills? Why don't you go practice typing in a chat room somewhere and leave us all alone. And please, don't come back unless you have something good to say.
Also, I happen to LOVE stories and books written in the 1st person. They make you feel more like you're a part of the story, better than third person stories. (Unless the authour of a 3rd person story is REALLY good). Gillikin, I'd be happy to go check out your story. It sounds really cool, and I LOVE the first person. In fact, I myself have been writing a BOOK since June of 1997, in the 1st person. Not much of it is online, but its enough to show you my real writing skills. <A HREF="http://us.vclart.net/vcl/Authors/AnimeCanuck/" TARGET=_blank>http://us.vclart.net/vcl/Authors/AnimeCanuck/</A>
Firewalkers is the book. (err.. I believe its the first chapter, more or less)
And the other file was a Rememberance Day poem I did in 1998, and it was entered as one of the selections from our school into the county-wide contest.<P>Also, Dragoness, I admire and appreciate your passion, but please... No swearing on my board, okay? ^^v
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Postby Gillikin on Sun Sep 30, 2001 1:31 am

Wow, you showed that you aren't perfect. It's a step in the right direction. <P>And to Christine and anyone else who wanted to read more of my story, I've put up the second chapter, and proofread the first chapter, so that it's much nicer. You can find them here - <A HREF="http://www.geocities.com/c_douglas82/mira1.htm" TARGET=_blank>Mira of Oz</A> <P>Oh yeah, and this is a bit sooner that I'd wanted to put this up, but I'm going to be needing some illustrators sometime this winter or spring. Not too many pictures, as the more pictures there are, the more expensive the book is to publish. The place where I want to get my book done by is very small, and so all profits go to keeping the books published. I'll make no money, so I'm afraid that you wouldn't either. I've already got a couple of takers to do some pictures, so it's not like you'd be doing the whole book. It looks like it's going to be about 20 chapters, and the best the place I'm getting my book published by can do is three pictures per chapter, tops. More likely only two. Still, it's better than nothing. So if any of you out there want to help illustrate it, I'd be greatly appreciative, Christine, Chibi-Alex Chan, Dragoness, Bryan Wong, anyone else I can't think of. If you want to, I'll give you more details after the book is compleatly finished (I'm about half way through writing in now). Don't worry, I'd give you three months or so to do the pictures, so you aren't too strained. Thanks!
~Chris<P>P.S. - One more thing, the pictures would have to be line art, nothing fancy. It's hard to reproduce highly shaded art at low cost. Color is out, for the moment as well, at least until I figure out who's going to do the front and back covers. It'd have to be inked, most likely. Like I said, I'll giver you more details after Christmas, or so. As a perk, all artists get to read it before it gets published. Everyone else just gets to read the first three chapters. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"> Sheesh, I'm long winded.<p>[This message has been edited by Gillikin (edited 09-30-2001).]
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Postby Harleq on Sun Sep 30, 2001 4:28 am

it's quite alrite if u don't believe i wroite it. like i said b4, that's a compliment. but you can check your local bookstore somethime next year for a fantasy book by a clever little 16-year-old. that's me.
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Postby ~Dragoness~ on Sun Sep 30, 2001 6:37 am

Excuse me? Me, immature? Please, look whos talking *rolls eyes* I do not play with barbies, nor do I listen to nsync.. I'm just betting since you know so much, you probaby do. And oh. my. god. You actually sounded kind in the last paragraph. Its amazing, I swear..
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Sun Sep 30, 2001 9:04 am

aminecanuck??<P>I guess I was right that you have poor typing skills. Look I never said you were a BAD writer.. I just said you weren't a GREAT writer. That doesn't mean that you aren't good. Besides... If you're really the great writer you say you are, you would have checked your post for spelling errors before posting it. My name is AnimeCanuck. Not "aminecanuck" as you put it in your last post.
I am sorry that I haven't read any of your writing, and that I might have implied that you are a bad writer, without reading any of your works. BUT (and that's a BIG but), reading how you post in here just tells me that I don't have to. If you want me to believe that you are a good writer, then prove it to me in here by ACTUALLY WRITING PROPERLY. That means, NO INTERNET SLANG. NO TYPOS. NO BAD GRAMMAR OR SPELLING. Then, if you can convince me through a post that you are not just some agnst-ridden 12 year old, then I will go read some of your other stuff. How are we to know that those things on IPublish were actually written by you anyway? After all, this is the internet, where people pretend to be other people and take credit for things that aren't their own all the time. SO PROVE YOURSELF. I DARE YOU.
Oh.. and one more thing. Don't just copy and paste something from somewhere. Including "your stuff" from ipublish as well. Just write. Trust me.. I'll be able to tell if you actually wrote it or not.<P>Thankyou, and good day.<P>-Christine the AnimeCanuck
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Fri Oct 05, 2001 8:08 am

Sure............... *rolls eyes*<P>Like, what would the title be? So I can look in Chapters??<P>
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Postby Gillikin on Mon Oct 08, 2001 5:26 am

:: plays gamble rumble, by move. sings along with it, too.::
Gamble, you gatta chance to make a Rumble!
GIRI GIRI no SUTEEJI (oh yeah!)
Gamble, you gatta dive in to a scramble!
ichi MIRI mo mayowazu (check it out come on!)
mamoru beki MONO nante jitsu ha sonna ni nai
(give it up yo! give it up yo!)
sukoshi dake tsuyogatte kake mashou zenbu play the game!<P>What? You don't listen to Jpop, too? It's a good song, you really should. <P>Hey, Christine, maybe she thought that Firewalkers was good, and didn't have anything bad to say, so she left? I haven't read it all, yet. I feel kind of guilty. Give me another week or two. <P>But look! New comic! YEAH! //007! This rocks! New Thermalyte! Will there be another one this Wednesday? Please? Pretty Please?<p>[This message has been edited by Gillikin (edited 10-08-2001).]
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Mon Oct 08, 2001 10:42 am

Oooh! I guess harleq is gone for good!<P>Yay.. *sarcasm in voice*<P>harleq was good for publicity, actually. He got people talking in my forums again. Oh well..
*sigh*<P>
I was hoping the little brat would have gone and read Firewalkers then gone and given his opinion on that. Oh well..<P>
He's gone! WoOOt!
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Tue Oct 09, 2001 6:41 am

Um... Unfortunately not, Gilikin. I'm working extra hours for my co-op tonight, so I doubt very much I'll have time to draw, much less upload another page..<P>But be expecting a silly Omake! on Friday, and hopefully after that, this comic will resume its regular schedule.<P>And that's okay about Firewalkers. I haven't even GONE to Mira of Oz, much less read it.
Hopefully I'll get to it soon. I'm excited about it. <P>See ya later!!<P><P>------------------
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Postby Gillikin on Tue Oct 09, 2001 10:04 am

Okay, I can wait until next friday for something new, and then 'til monday for a new comic. I can wait a little bit. <P>Wait a sec, you said that you would be happy to help draw the pictures for my book, and you haven't even read any of it yet? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/rolleyes.gif"> Silly Christine. Well, hopefully you'll like it, or else you won't have a very good time drawing, now will you? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> I'm afraid that you won't be seeing the book in any bookstores, though. Oz books are never very popular, so they'll mainly be sold either at Oz coventions, or online. I'll make sure to get a copy to each of my illustrators, though. Like I said, very small operation. Still, it is good experience.<P>I see you've got a new signature. I figured it was time to change mine, as well. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/tongue.gif"><P>------------------
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Wed Oct 10, 2001 7:38 am

Hehehe! Gilikin! That's an awesome signature!!! It's true though!!!<P>Reading DOES make you broke! If I bought all the books I want, (instead of just reading most of them IN the store) both my parents and I would be flat broke! And maybe in debt too. (hehe)<P>So we get a copy of the book too?? That's really cool! Um... I'm going to go read your other post now, okay???<P>See ya, G my man!<P>^^<P><P>------------------
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Postby Harleq on Wed Oct 17, 2001 3:35 am

hoho, mr. aMINecanuck, u think that patheitc waste of internet space is better than my writing?? pfft. dont make me laugh.<P>angst ridden 12-y/o, huh? whos the one that cant spell? idiot.<P>mr. t pities u, foo.
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Postby Gillikin on Wed Oct 17, 2001 7:27 am

"Butsu karu koto mitomeru koto
otona ni natte mo wasurenai"<P>(I will not forget
how important it is to meet with others
and accept them for who they are in order for me to grow up)<P>You misspell Anime, you call Christine a guy, you act rude, and you bash Christine & her works every chance you get. I think it's time that you 'accept others for who they are', and grow up. Please, just go away.
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Postby ~Dragoness~ on Thu Oct 18, 2001 9:35 am

Teheheee.. *swats Harleq*
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Fri Oct 19, 2001 7:13 am

Who's the one who can't spell, harleq??
I suggest you look up "pathetic" in the dictionary. Its you.<P>Anyways.. Don't come back here. I've had enough of you. You just like thinking you're right and everyone else is wrong. Well, go do that somewhere else. BYE!!<P><P>------------------
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Postby Illusion on Sat Mar 16, 2002 5:04 pm

On 2001-09-30 05:28:00, harleq wrote:
it's quite alrite if u don't believe i wroite it. like i said b4, that's a compliment. but you can check your local bookstore somethime next year for a fantasy book by a clever little 16-year-old. that's me.

Ohmygod, you're such an idiot. You read the messages, you replied to them. However, you never, ever concentrate on 95% of the message...just the 5% which there's some chance to 'prove' them wrong.

"After all, this is the internet, where people pretend to be other people and take credit for things that aren't their own all the time. SO PROVE YOURSELF. I DARE YOU."

This pretty much proved it clearly. You completely ignored a post which you were replying to, the part which there was capitals. Based on your personality prototype, you would, since it's so easy to. What's the point of not doing so and having the annoyance of proving to these 'untalented' that you are? In other words, by far the easiest solution was to talk in that way for just one post. Yet you didn't.

In other words, all the stuff you've shown to us before was...not yours.

Additionally, your site (where you hosted the pictures). I believe you have quite a tendency to lie. It said on there that you exceeded bandwidth because too many people look at your site, yet...the direct link which takes you to your new one doesn't even have 350 hits. Yeah sure, we all believe you (shut up). Oh, and if that wouldn't be considered 'proof', how about the fact that the site it was transferred to also was hosted by geocities? It didn't even change hosts.

Personally, I believe you wrote the story though. But that's not a compliment. You wanted to write something that makes you sound impressive...you know what? Writers are people by far who can see others in different points of view, from theirs, from their own, from others...you lacked the flavor that writers have. Your great artworks are just random integers of numbers punched in meaningless. It's not a great work. It's just a crappy story with no flavor, that had its words replaced to ones which nobody in your age range could understand.

Oh, and don't you dare say something stupid now, you're gonna say something offtopic and not talk about the rest of the post. It's pretty obvious that you do, considering you jump points from multiple posts yet your posts are very short...in other words, you read all the posts, then you said something that you can't really 'say something back to'. Which was, incidentially 95% of their message, so your answer was really, really small.

It's people like you, dear, that will never get anywhere in life. You know why you pretend and lie all the time? Because you can't do it. You can only lie about it, because you suck so much you can't really try and be able to make something that anybody would give a shit about. you're one more person who's gonna have no life, think that you're gonna be successful because you can remember facts so fast, then get replaced by a computer and go homeless.

Well, nice future isn't it.

Oh, talking about good art, take a look at this... illusionsworld.tripod.com/ore/
It's my site, although all the art's done by a friend (female in case you didn't notice). The amazing thing about her is she can draw bodies perfectly without any sketching beforehand... (you know how a lot of people do all the lines in order to make it look good? She doesn't even need to, the sketch IS her final copy).

Oh, and I don't think age makes a huge difference...for example, this is a little excerpt from my 12-year old sister's writing (she was 11 at the time).

"Tes hadn't bothered listening to his teacher. He knew what she had to say; he had little respect for any of his teachers, and she was no exception. He pulled out several unkempt drawings, covered with markings, measurements, half-finished ideas, and other such scribblings, and laid them out on his desk. Digging deeper into his bag, he removed a large quantity of raw materials, bits of wood and metals, a small quantity of glue (he had concocted it himself, and was quite proud of its superiority to that supplied by the school. Of course, the glue provided by the school didn't cause instantaneous death if swallowed, but certain trade-offs had to be made), and placed them in a heap next to his papers and models. Grabbing one of them, he began to add and subtract various pieces, experimenting with tensile strength and durability. The teacher stopped at his desk and plucked the device from his hands. Turning around in her hands, examining it skeptically, a mildly puzzled look spread over her face"

Anyways...this is getting too long so.
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Postby Gillikin on Sat Mar 16, 2002 10:38 pm

Wow, this is an old post... But welcome to the board, Illusion. Hope that you enjoy Christine's comic! ^_^
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Postby AnimeCanuck on Sun Mar 17, 2002 3:32 pm

Its new to me! Wow! Your little sister has a good vocabulary! She must read a whole lot! (like I did!) ^_^

You know what? I began writing Firewalkers (my wannabe book with NO real plot line..... its pretty good for something so crappy...) at the end of grade seven, when I was 12. So that's really cool. I know my grammar has improved, my spelling, A LOT, and obviously.. I think about things diferently now.. but I still love that story of mine.. even though I keep writing myself into holes.. Even though its pretty much whatever I feel like when I feel like writing it. You know? I think I should type more of it up. Hm...
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Well.. Thanks for caring, Illusion! ^_^

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Postby Illusion on Mon Mar 18, 2002 7:59 pm

No matter how hard I tried somehow any topic with titles like "BOO! THIS COMIC SUX!" cannot be ignored... >_<

Writing has some nice elements in it, its nice how each word sounds like what it means...

By the way, this may be a personal question to you guys so you don't have to answer, but how old are oyu now?
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