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Posted: Mon May 28, 2001 2:23 am
by Emily Teal Young
I am speaking in
Japanese poems called haiku
all because of <A HREF="
http://www.punkasspunk.com" TARGET=_blank>this</A>.<P>You should try it too.
It drives people up the wall.
Especially me.<P>... Remind me not to make another "snack plate" consisting of sugary foods again. I'm off my rocker. Ooh...<P>I'm off my rocker
because I ate some sugar.
I have no regrets.<P>::bows::<P>~Em
Posted: Mon May 28, 2001 7:12 am
by Andrew_mike
I heard you became
The mayor of SimCity
You have my congrats.<P>-Andrew<P> <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Emily Teal Young:
<B>I am speaking in
Japanese poems called haiku
all because of <A HREF="
http://www.punkasspunk.com" TARGET=_blank>this</A>.<P>You should try it too.
It drives people up the wall.
Especially me.<P>... Remind me not to make another "snack plate" consisting of sugary foods again. I'm off my rocker. Ooh...<P>I'm off my rocker
because I ate some sugar.
I have no regrets.<P>::bows::<P>~Em</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>
Posted: Mon May 28, 2001 7:31 am
by Lordgeejay
This is a weird thing.
You are writing in Haiku
But I don't know how.
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2001 5:01 am
by Emily Teal Young
Thank you for the note.
That's right, I am the Mayor!
but only for now.
I have greater plans,
like taking over the world--
My paycheck's too small.<P>Your haiku are fine.
The right number in each line.
But content matters.<P>furu ike ya
kawazu tobikomu
mizu no oto<P>I wish my haiku
could be as good as Bassho,
so I'll keep trying.<P>::skips around::<P>And in other news,
I went to the eye doctor.
It was lots of fun.
He told me something.
I have Optic Nerve Drusen.
Calcium buildup.
I love my doctor
'cause he dilated my eyes
and now they are stuck.
They ache a little.
I'm not worried; it's okay.
Pictures, anyone?<P>~Em
Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 1:27 am
by Emily Teal Young
My eyes are just fine.
It's a condition from birth.
Optic Nerve Drusen!
Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 2:48 am
by Chibialex
I love Bassho's poems,b tu I'm no good at haiku (i can't count sysbles for carp)
Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 4:37 am
by Lordgeejay
Optic Nerve Drusen?
I hope you're feeling better.
Give your eyes some rest.<P>ok?
Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 7:56 am
by Lordgeejay
If it is since birth
You must be used to it now
I was just worried.<P>To Chibi Alex,
I'm not good at it either.
I'm just having fun.<P> <IMG SRC="
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 8:35 am
by Emily Teal Young
Thanks for the worry.
It is hard to express well
using just haiku.
But it sure is fun!
Haiku aren't that hard to do.
My teacher taught me:<P>"Every time you move your jaw down is a syllable."<P>That might help. <IMG SRC="
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 9:07 am
by Gillikin
What a lovely thing
Of Haiku do we all praise
Each like a jewel<P>Your comic I love
The fairies are so much fun
As are the elf folk<P>If Feo will take
Me into the Elven Land
As he said he might<P>A fairy of my
Own would be a great delight
My thanks I do give<P>Shining light of hope
Life with tiny little wings
- Enchanting fairy<P>Well that was fun! Thanks for saying you'd try to get me into the Elven world Feodor! You pick the place and the time and I'll be there. <IMG SRC="
http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Oh, and you get first choice of any (to quote you) 'hot Elven Chicas' that we run across. Doubt any of them would wanna date a human anywho. <IMG SRC="
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 11:44 am
by Lordgeejay
Content does matter.
Though I can't keep my silence
And so I must speak.
Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 12:23 am
by Lordgeejay
Difficult it is
Rules of Syllabic Rhythm
But still I do this.<P>What is this I hear
About going to Elf Land
I want to go, too.<P> <IMG SRC="
http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"><P>I have to stop this
But I can't control myself
From writing Haiku.<P>:P
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 2:24 am
by Emily Teal Young
According to Fey:
"Some Elven chicks like humans.
It is a fetish."<P>Hirsch has a fetish.
He likes blood and food and me.
Or at least my arms.<P>That's why I don't like
Hirschel the Vampiric Elf.
He tries to eat me.<P>On other topics,
I have a gift for you two.
I will send e-mail.<P>Don't thank Feodor.
He can't send you to Elf-land.
But Emiko can!<P>Bwahahahaha!
I am better than Fey is!
Because I can draw. ^^<P>~Em
Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 9:15 am
by Gillikin
A goddess thou art
To thee my true thanks I give
Though art yet unseen<P>If to Elven Land
Thou can send me with thy art
In thine debt am I<P>Whatever it is you're sending, thanks! <IMG SRC="
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~Gillikin
Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2001 6:24 am
by Andrew_mike
Haiku aren't stupid.
They're simply poems that have
A weird rhyming scheme.
You're more insane, though,
For writing your last Haiku
Right at 3 AM.<P>-Andooru
Posted: Sat Jun 09, 2001 11:26 am
by Emily Teal Young
Haiku are stupid.
Yet here I am writing one.
I must be insane.<P>XD
Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 2:04 am
by Geejay
You are not alone
In writing Haiku for fun.
All of us here, do.<P>-Gaburieru
