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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2001 3:23 am
by Essay Fox
I liked it! Keep them coming! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2001 4:47 am
by Niquee
Ooh that 'un's good!! Keep up the chapters!<P>------------------
~Wanted: One bunny w/ blue cape. Escaped from insane asylum at 12:54pm. If seen, hit her in the head w/ a club. Reward on delivery.~

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2001 11:40 am
by Ironpaw
This is shorter and rather violent. What can I say? Too much Tom Clancy and W.E.B. Griffin. <P>
***<P>A volley of fully automatic gunfire echoed through the canyons several miles away, followed by another and still another. Several similar sounding machine guns clacked away, quickly answered by the buzz of a smaller, faster one, and then silence. Twap and Xe looked at each other somberly, and for once, Twap had nothing to say.<P>***End Chapter One.***<P>Misha slipped into the woods quietly as Twap and the others began to pack up their belongings. He didn