Let go!

Simply_da_Best · Post by **Simply_da_Best** » Thu Mar 29, 2001 5:41 am

This place is to make up a poem about something, not obcene, and it's also a e-stress-reliever. So, I'll start!

I feel like a forgiven one
That was persectuted forever
To waste in Tartarus
I let the true feelings waste
Away
I never knew love
I scoffed at friendship
I let my family go
Yet they said,
"That's okay,
You are the lucky one
You begged forgiveness
Your sins have come undone
Because you asked
Instead of begged"
I felt my life
And Burdens
Slip away
I was Elated
I was transformed that day
Into a new soul
One that loved
One that knew
I am through

Crazykid · Post by **Crazykid** » Thu Mar 29, 2001 5:47 am

THANK YOU SDB! I needed that! I'm not a poetry person, but I'll try.I was not a happy kid,
I was always feeling down,
but I had my friend,
who were always around.As I lost some special feelings,
some other new feelings came,
for boys,
and feelings that other people had the same.My friends fought,
about some same people,
and for some reason,
we came closer.I had almost lost something special,
because of something stupid,
so now I have fun with boys,
but with my friends too!
Ok, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY lame moral. The point is, you can have boyfriends, but good girlfriends too! Oh yah!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">

Sour Fox is an idiot · Fri Mar 30, 2001 4:46 am

THANK YOU SDB! I needed that! I'm not a poetry person, but I'll try.
I was not a happy kid,
I was always feeling down,
but I had my friend,
who were always around.As I lost some special feelings,
some other new feelings came,
for boys,
and feelings that other people had the same.My friends fought,
about some same people,
and for some reason,
we came closer.I had almost lost something special,
because of something stupid,
so now I have fun with boys,
but with my friends too!
Ok, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY lame moral. The point is, you can have boyfriends, but good girlfriends too! Oh yah!!

Simply_da_Best · Post by **Simply_da_Best** » Fri Mar 30, 2001 5:48 am

Okay, here's one about fright. I feel
Pained
Like I'm in a metal box
Studded with nails
I feel like I am running through an endless Maze of
Fright
Trying to find the way out that isn't there
Just for something to do to calm my nerves
That come from the centaur who runs beside me
In the meadow of anger
That is filled with
Nothing
Help me

DragonKeeper · Post by **DragonKeeper** » Sat Mar 09, 2002 6:37 pm

Paronia

Looking over your shoulder,
The shadows stalk you.
Nothing looks familiar,
but everythings the same.
the footsteps falling are your own,
yet more pairs join their song
as all the others of the world
the lost spirits of the nations,
join the fight for peace

just a little post 9-11 peace message

Simply_da_Best · Post by **Simply_da_Best** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 4:10 pm

Poetry sucks

Niquee · Post by **Niquee** » Sun Mar 17, 2002 11:46 am

I like poetry. Even if I'm not that good at writing it.

Sweet river flow gently to me
Oh sweet river to me
Build your waves up passionately
Flow so calm and hopefully
Flow through the veins of my soul
And kill the evils that lay in the darkness
Wash your hopes among my dreams
And only you will know what it truly means
Whirlpools of my thoughts
Drowned in the foam of your strenght
Let me follow you to the deepest ends
Let me touch your waterfalls
And bathe in your pools of light
Oh-sweet river be kind to me
As I wash away my fears in you
Take away my deepest sins and vanqish them
In the bottomless pools of blue
Sweet river flow through me and over me
And oh river, take me away
I shall throw myself in your depths
And together we shall be one
Sweet river flow gently to me
Oh sweet river to me

Not one of my bests...but what can I say. This is my newest piece so I didn't have time to revise it. Happy St. Paddy's Day, folks.