On 2002-04-04 06:05, Hanako wrote:
And for the record, constructive criticism is when a person points out
the fault of another, so that that particular person will be aware of their faults, and correct
them (which is improving.....characters, storylines, backgrounds... yeah I pretty much
think that was covered). Perhaps itMike Johnson
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On 2002-04-03 16:39, Hanako wrote:
I just have a few things to say about this comic (NGTI). In Meredith's defense, I understand why she doesn't post comics daily because contrary to popular belief, Meredith does have a "Life" outside the comic book realm (you do don't you?) This maybe the only "REAL" criticism Meredith will ever receive.
I have come across a few problems with the comic. One, the art is okay, I really don't care if it's in marker or CG, but is there any way to improve on the faces? I mean, how pointy are they gonna get? A bit more expression in the faces wouldn't hurt either (C'MON THEY'RE TOO STICK-FIGURED).
Second, what the HELL kinda story are you writing?? Most of what I've read are pieces that I've either seen on TV shows, or read in other comics. Some fresh ideas would be nice (be bold!).
Third, please kill that bird--it's just waisted paper and ink.
Finally, add a bit of background. A few lines and color don't cut it.
Well Meredith, if you are reading this, please take this to heart: Work on your art!
You need help money-wise for a convention, which is sad, because you're not that good of an artist. Quite frankly, I'd be ashamed if I were you. I'll be surprised if you take in 600 dollars.
You wrote that today's comic strip would be the last--please keep your promise.
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