"One Last Hand"

Matt Trepal · Post by **Matt Trepal** » Sun Oct 28, 2001 8:08 am

Just out of curiosity, has anybody checked out the story I posted? If so, what did you think?<P>If you haven't and you want to, you can find it <A HREF="http://fightcastorevade.keenspace.com/story.html" TARGET=_blank>here</A>.<p>[This message has been edited by Matt Trepal (edited 10-28-2001).]

BeersnThrillers · Post by **BeersnThrillers** » Fri Nov 02, 2001 7:36 am

A nice (if short) story. Decent plot, good character development, very evocative of the period. You made me care about the characters. Keep 'em coming!<P>------------------

Matt Trepal · Post by **Matt Trepal** » Sat Nov 03, 2001 7:49 am

Thanks, Beers! Character development is one of the hardest parts of writing, drama or comedy, prose or comics; when readers connect with them... SCORE! It's always a big boost to the creative juices to hear that!<P>And if you think it's short, it's actually not as short as it was supposed to be. The contest it was submitted for had a limit about one-third what it finally turned out to be. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">