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by **Damonk13** on Tue Nov 21, 2000 11:43 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by Coota:
Hopefully he already saw mine and is already sending a critique. Undoubtebly.
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>Heh. I had a bit of free time tonight (i.e., I needed a break from my Shakespeare research!), so I actually went and did yours up. I hope I won't receive any letterbombs. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">

by **Damonk13** on Tue Nov 21, 2000 11:51 am

Originally posted by Ucchan:
<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> Cool! What are the poems? What have they been published in?
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>A few academic literary journals, most recently The Windsor Review. A tiny smattering of chapbook anthologies.An e-zine or two.etc. etc.I'm far from the big time, but I'm slowly jamming my foot in the door... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">As for what my poems are, I didn't want to impose my stuff upon you all... This is a thread to let you all showcase YOUR wonderful poetics to me and the world! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>
When I find some of my old poetry, I'll post it.
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>Good. I'm looking forward to reading it.

by **Damonk13** on Sat Nov 25, 2000 9:36 am

Barring any major complications, Pyro and scrubbo should get critiques tomorrow at the latest.Is there anyone else I missed? I think only 3 people so far have asked for my opinion... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">And, dammit!I want to see more poetry here!!!How else am I supposed to steal your ide~~ err, get inspired???

by **Scrubbo** on Sat Nov 25, 2000 12:21 pm

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by damonk13:
How else am I supposed to steal your ide~~ err, get inspired???<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>AHA! You scaliwag! Scurvey dog!Well, be careful if you steal poetry from me. It might get you slapped by somebody! (Although I've only been slapped once for a poem, but I had earned it.)I have another Haiku, but you'll have to wait for it to show up in my strip. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Henry Rollins is so damn inspiring!------------------
Scrubbo
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A place to rest your weary soul.

by **Michael** on Mon Nov 27, 2000 3:26 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by damonk13:

(Damn University, forcing me to write Term Papers!!)<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
Hey! You go to Damn University? That's where I went, too! Dear old D.U.------------------
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by **Damonk13** on Mon Nov 27, 2000 12:17 pm

Sh**.Sorry I'm late Pyro and Scrubs.If it's not finished by tomight, it will be by tomorrow night, I promise.(Damn University, forcing me to write Term Papers!!)

by **Matt Trepal** on Tue Nov 28, 2000 5:54 am

There was a young shepherd from Crete,
Who thought he was being discrete.
When his friends went to town
His toga came down
And the whole island heard his flock bleat.That's from Plato: The Limericks. It's some of his earlier work, and admittedly not the best-known. Perhaps more will show up when I can get it translated.------------------
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by **Damonk13** on Tue Nov 28, 2000 9:31 am

Pyro, your critique has been sent.Scrubbo, your haiku is next.

by **Damonk13** on Tue Nov 28, 2000 10:06 am

There. Now Scrubbo's critique has been sent.That's it for critique requests so far folks.If anyone else wants to offer poetry to be critiqued, take the opportunity while it's being offered! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">

by **Scrubbo** on Wed Nov 29, 2000 2:28 am

Cool Damonk! That's for the critique!Okay, here's a new haiku for you. This time I'm attempting to jam my thumb here, and stick to more visual images....Heh heh.Here goes :fingers guide pen
strokes of inky muse blooming
stains upon fingers*cringe*
I hope I did better on this one! ^_^I'll try something new for my next attempt at poetry.------------------
Scrubbo
<A HREF="http://www.sillyconev.com" TARGET=_blank>Silly Cone V</A>
A place to rest your weary soul.[This message has been edited by scrubbo (edited 11-29-2000).]

by **Scrubbo** on Wed Nov 29, 2000 4:47 am

And back for round _4_ of bad Scrubbo Poetry......My attempt at a Word Sonnet, inspired by Damonk himself. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> He's quite good!Two poems. I like the first one, but I'm not convinced it follows Word Sonnet rules quite correctly. But then, what do I know. I did the second one just using the rubber grasping asphalt and knees bit because that's what I like the most and tried to get a sentence into the poem. The first one is a first hand perspective, the second is an observers perspective.Wind
screaming
by,
rubber
grasping
asphalt,
pushing
inside,
pulling
alongside,
passing,
knee
touching
ground.Alternative version :Rubber
grasps
asphalt
and
knees
slide
on
pavement
as
racers
pour
through
the
corner.------------------
Scrubbo
<A HREF="http://www.sillyconev.com" TARGET=_blank>Silly Cone V</A>
A place to rest your weary soul.

by **Damonk13** on Wed Nov 29, 2000 10:07 am

Woohoo! Attempts at Word Sonnets!Everyone should try their hand at it ~~ it's real simple!Just write a 14-word poem, with one line per word! Poof! Instant word sonnet! It offers you the concision of a haiku with the flexibility of 14 words as opposed to 17 syllables!Word sonnets are one of my personal favorite styles out there at the moment (the form is still very new and unexplored, even!)...G'wan, folks! Try your hand at it! They're a real hoot! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">

by **Rabidazell** on Wed Nov 29, 2000 11:06 am

Dregs
Flow
across
gutter
into
man's
open
mouth
'Gods
Why
Me?'Wha?------------------
Australian diplomat to the comic world

by **Stig Hemmer** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 2:06 am

I read word sonnets
Eyes strain badly. Brain hurts worse.
A poor mans haiku.------------------
Stig Hemmer, at your disservice.

by **TheLaser** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:16 am

LOL!
It seems someone wrote a word sonnet without even noticing!
<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>It's
high
school.
It's
drama.
It's
Canadian.
It's
NOT
Degrassi
Junior
High,
dammit.
AVALON
<IMG SRC="http://www.avalonhigh.com/misc/banners/avalonbanner-degrassi.gif"> <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>--
TheLaser[This message has been edited by TheLaser (edited 11-30-2000).]

by **Ucchan** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:24 am

Here's my Haiku about what the foiled potato reminds me of:Potato foiled up,
All ready to be baked now.
Mmm baked potato!Please don't make him a baked potato ... I have a nervous feeling now. ^_^;

by **TheLaser** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 4:27 am

*plays around with word sonnets a bit*hmmm.... 1337ish could make a good word sonnet...
 <blockquote>i
g0t
w4r3z!
i
4m
4
h4x0r!
i
4m
1337!
i
0wn
j00!
w00t!</blockquote> So, what do you think?--
TheLaser

by **Damonk13** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 6:29 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by TheLaser:
LOL!
It seems someone wrote a word sonnet without even noticing!<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>Congrats, Laser! You just showed an excellent example of "found poetry!"This is actually one of the things that Augustus Young liked to do most with his word sonnets~~ go figure!!I'm beginning to suspect that you may be Augustus Young in real life, The Laser... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">

by **TheLaser** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 9:22 am

Look... a framed (pseudo) Haiku!
<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Harvest potato.
Pun a little more, Damonk
You know we love it.
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>
And it even has a seasonal word and a reference to nature!

(by the way, is your nick actually 2 syllables? Not quite sure how to pronounce it...)
--
TheLaser*fixes some UBB stuff*
*and some spealling stuff*
[This message has been edited by TheLaser (edited 11-30-2000).]

by **Scrubbo** on Thu Nov 30, 2000 9:23 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by damonk13:
Woohoo! Attempts at Word Sonnets!
<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>Hmmmm..... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Is this my critique?
LOL!------------------
Scrubbo
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A place to rest your weary soul.

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