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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:02 am

If only I was a more industrious business person, I could start a cheesecake baking company and send some delicious tiny cheesecakes to you in the mail. *waves magical mail cheesecakes to you*
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:43 am

*noms happily while working on more Colly Sides* :D
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby valar on Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:33 am

From what I observed,Bhruic looked perplexed(yet curious) in the first panel and in the middle of passing from annoyed to angry in the last panel. Really detailed expressions on this page. :D
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Fri Sep 25, 2009 5:28 am

Faylin looks like he's been hitting the gym in the middle panel today. XD
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Sun Sep 27, 2009 9:11 am

Nuraeariel wrote:Faylin looks like he's been hitting the gym in the middle panel today. XD


Faylin is a muscular guy. He does have a very manly physique, no matter how poorly I usually portray it. = \

valar wrote:From what I observed,Bhruic looked perplexed(yet curious) in the first panel and in the middle of passing from annoyed to angry in the last panel. Really detailed expressions on this page. :D


Well, that sounds about right. I'm glad the expressions are. . . expressive. They have lived up to their names.
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Bm-Atticus on Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:55 pm

Hi there, I've been reading this comic for about a year and a half, mostly for the story, but also because I love watching the art improve with each chapter.

I loved the way you used the hard light of the lantern to your advantage in this page. You were very successful in creating the slightly creepy atmosphere.

There was only one thing on this page that bothered me. In the first panel when Collamair is walking towards the door, everything was great until I noticed the left foot. When a person is walking the foot that they have in front of them has the toe pointing up until the heel hits the ground and the other foot is making its ascent, and by then the foot in front is already flat.

But the rest of the body itself gives the illusion of movement which is very nice. I know it probably sounds nitpicky but after working with animation for a few years and making more walk cycles then I care to count, you tend to notice these things.

However, I love the rest of the art, particularly the clothing.

And Straun. I've really started to like him lately.

Keep up the good work!
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Wed Sep 30, 2009 6:20 pm

Hi! I'm glad you've been enjoying the story, clothes, Struan and most of the art.

Actually your criticism of that first panel is fine and well founded. I ink this by hand, and on the original page I'd started Colly too close to the bottom of the frame so that in order to get his feet in the shot, I gave him a REAAAAALLLY wide step. And then after I scanned it went, "That's silly, is he on a mission or something? I'll make that less wide." So I dragged him up and selected his legs and moved/warped them just a little, which was enough to correct the wide step, but then created the foot issues. I'm actually kind of a lazy person, and I went, "Meh, good enough!" XD

So that's the story of Collamair's strange step thing!

[and please, feel free to notice away]
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:47 pm

oops. I . . . forgot to upload the comic last night. But it's better now.
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:49 pm

ANNE! You logged off before I could agree with you that Colly in #5 IS superb.
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Thu Oct 08, 2009 2:55 pm

So sorry, Nura. It'll never happen again. :D
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:04 am

Allroses wrote:So sorry, Nura. It'll never happen again. :D


You're excused for now because I'm not going to have internet from tomorrow until Wednesday because I'm moooooving! :D

But I shall carry the image of Colly in panel #7 with me until I can connect again. :3
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:20 pm

Colly has Cait's thumbnail, is that what we're supposed to notice? XD
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby valar on Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:28 pm

Nuraeariel wrote:Colly has Cait's thumbnail, is that what we're supposed to notice? XD
I noticed that too, perhaps faylin could bring him a nail file as a gift? :lol:
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Wed Oct 14, 2009 6:27 pm

No! That is NOT what you're supposed to notice! :shifty:
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Nuraeariel on Wed Oct 14, 2009 7:35 pm

I'm just kidding. I think you changed the font, right? No more Comic Sans?

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XD I've never been stabbed, but I pity those who have.
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby BlackFriesians on Thu Oct 15, 2009 4:10 am

Yea, the font is definitely different. Just look at those a's!
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:00 pm

Yes! It's the font. :shifty: Jerks.

Is this a good change? Should it be permanent?
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby BlackFriesians on Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:04 pm

Why are we jerks for answering your question?! :P

I like it, but I also hate comic sans so I'm slightly more biased than one who doesn't hate comic sans. The only thing is that it's hard to tell I from l.
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby Allroses on Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:39 pm

You're not the jerk, BF, it's mostly NURA. :-?

Lots of people hate it, apparently. No one has ever said to me specifically to change it, but I know there is a lot of hate for comic sans.

You're right though . . . those letters are hard to differentiate. AUGH! T_T It took me so long to find that font too. There are not many comicky fonts with lowercases.

What to do now! D:
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Re: Chapter 22 Comments

Postby BlackFriesians on Thu Oct 15, 2009 2:54 pm

Well, whenever there is a capital I, use comic sans on that I? xD
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