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Cheerleader: Page 21 Panel 4

Postby Cojoinedcows on Thu Jun 14, 2007 10:48 pm

"Damn." Chloe thought. "That worked way to well." The door shut behind her and she found herself standing in the middle of a warm pool of clear water, surrounded by mangroves and other tropical plants. Little sparkling fish shot around her ankles. Her cheerleader disguise was gone, instead she wore a piece of white silk that barely covered her suddenly gigantic breasts.
"Dammit Jules! Are you about done? I felt ridiculous enough wearing that skirt!"
A disembodied voice answered her. It was that of an old man, but without weakness, coming from all around her, strong and calm.
"I need to run a full scan on you before I let you in, Chloe."
"But... In THIS outfit?"
"I think you look gorgeous, darling."
"Asshole." Chloe crossed her arms in front of her breast, as if to prevent someone who wasn't there to see something that wasn't real. VR can be weird.
Something started beeping, an Imitation of an old alarm clock.
"Dammit Jules, what is it?"
"Hold on Baby..." Seconds of Silence. "You're being traced."
"WHAT? No I'm not! My security should..."
"Your security is crap, Chloe. Commercial shit-shat that only shows you what you are meant to be seen. It propably hasn't even detected the trace."
Chloe suddenly felt vulnerable. She wished Jules had put her into a knight's armor instead of this ridiculous nymph's outfit.
"Well, can you DO something?"
"Sure thing babe. I'll put you through some jumps. Just hold thight and don't do anything, ok?"
"Can you at least give me another outfit for that?"
Jules didn't answer, but suddenly the pool of water and the plants were gone. Instead Chloe stood on top of a mountain in a tight leather suit, looking down into a valley where some kind of war was going on.
JUMP
Everything changed. A purple Sky, Dragons flying across and breathing fire.
JUMP
Water. All around her. She couldn't breathe.
JUMP
A brickhouse in front of her. A man wearing a helmet shouted orders.
JUMP
The famous World of Witchcraft Ivenue.
JUMP
Pure Whitenes. As Chloe prepared for another jump, a desk appeared out of nowhere, an old man sitting behind it.
"Hello Chloe."
"Hey Jules. You're done?"
"Sure. You're clean now. While you were jumping, I erased parts of the logs with an old trick I learned in the early days."
"Already done? P.C.I." Chloe changed her Clothes. "Damn Jules, you really are a Styxer aren't you?"
"Shit-shat. I'm just someone exploiting security leaks with a few old tricks. Nothing compared to a Styxer."
"Well if you say so." Chloe threw him a sceptical look. "How much?"
"The usual."
Chloe hit some buttons on her PCI and money vanished from her account, reappearing on one of Jules'.
"So... I am clean?" Chloe asked uncertainly.
"Yes. As clean as it gets." Jules winked, then he vanished and Chloe found herself in her loadspace, without having given a command to disconnect. Damn, the old bastard was good.
And her? She was rich.
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Postby Jameslong on Fri Jun 15, 2007 4:06 am

Very nice!! :D
your english is flawless, man!
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Postby Arcnaver on Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:59 am

NICE! So did Jules Damper with her Mamory Gland Slider, or did Chloe?
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Postby Cojoinedcows on Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:55 am

Thanks for the positive feedback, guys. :)
I'm reading you Captain America thing and I like it a lot. Just didn't dare to post there. ;)
But... what the hell is a "Mamory Gland Slider"? :D

Edit: Posted this in my favourite german forum for selfwritten stuff. I hope it attracts one or two readers... ;)
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Postby Jameslong on Fri Jun 15, 2007 9:12 am

thanks, Dread.... hopefully my site is back up when they come for a visit. :D

(a mamory gland is a boob, by the way)
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Postby Arcnaver on Fri Jun 15, 2007 4:26 pm

LOL
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Postby Cojoinedcows on Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:04 am

:D
Jules is a dirty old man, Adam.
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Postby Jameslong on Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:07 am

(sigh) Aren't we all?

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Postby Cojoinedcows on Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:38 am

Hey! 20 is NOT old!
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Postby Koto on Sat Jun 16, 2007 12:05 pm

cojoinedcows wrote:Hey! 20 is NOT old!


:-? But it can sure feel it. :shifty:
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Postby Cojoinedcows on Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:53 pm

Depends on how deep a conversation you had with Johnny Walker the night before. :)
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Postby Koto on Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:34 pm

Or Captain Morgan
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Postby Jameslong on Sun Jun 17, 2007 5:54 am

bah! captain vlad could beat up captain morgan

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Postby Cojoinedcows on Sun Jun 17, 2007 8:59 am

but he'd have a hard time beating up that 73% vol black label stuff. that one used to beat ME up. the bartender at one of my favourite bars back in my hometown used to mix some cocktails which weren't on the menue. i think the one with the black label captain morgan was called "ace up the sleeve". can't be sure though, my memory is kinda foggy...
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Postby Koto on Sun Jun 17, 2007 2:23 pm

cojoinedcows wrote:but he'd have a hard time beating up that 73% vol black label stuff. that one used to beat ME up. the bartender at one of my favourite bars back in my hometown used to mix some cocktails which weren't on the menue. i think the one with the black label captain morgan was called "ace up the sleeve". can't be sure though, my memory is kinda foggy...


that's the good stuff

.....ooooooh yeaaaaaaahhhhhh! 8-)
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