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Oh, E Sailor Whisker, we're trying to write this thing in script format for simplicity. But if you must not, then please try not doing it in first person.<P>Oh yeah, and how does you character have the body of a 7 year old and long legs?

Omnie sitting by Koji: Ah, I see the dispatch line is now available for the omnie over their has just dialed dispatch. Good, now you, inferior, can be dealt with properly.<P>Koji: Hey, I wouldn't talk so loudly in class. Back home, if the teacher thought you were too loud, you got in big trouble.<P>...

Okay, time for attempt #2.<P>_________<P>
Panel 1:<P>SS: Yes. That's right.<P>Panel 2:<P>Goku: Okay...so why were you a tree?<P>Panel 3:<P>SS: There's a good explanation for that. You see *cough cough* and then *cough cough* and so you see it all makes sense.

Well, okay then, I'll get my script a shot.<P>Panel 1: <P>ChibiPiccolo is pointing a finger accusingly at Goku.<P>ChibiPiccolo: You, your in my spot.<P>Panel 2:<P>Goku has a puzzeled look.<P>Goku: Your spot?<P>Panel 3:<P>Piccolo: Yes, I find the shade and nearby stream good for meditation.<P>Panel 4...

Script format then? Okay, I'll give it a shot.<P>Koji took his seat while he strained his ears to hear what was going on outside the hall; as a Namek-jin, his hearing was good enough to do such things. <P>Apparently, the teachers within the broken doors were ignoring the problem to let the maintenen...

A new forbez strip? Hmm, maybe this imposter thing will work out after all...<P>

How would an imposter change the layout of CDC's page? Hah! Got you there, didn't I?

Cool.

Geez, I forgot all about this. Sorry! Anyway, I'm going to force my way back in now...<P>----------------------<P>Koji looked up from his book, for the first time realizing he was alone. When the bleacher had gone down, so had the forcefield, and logically he'd gone for his book. Maybe that wasn't s...

Okay, whatever.

Okay, my title is...<P>Kojini, the...!!! I don't have one. Oh well.

Okay then, I am...a Namek!<P>Anyway, I think I'll just wait a little bit longer for someone to jump in.<P>And oh yeah, one more thing. Michelle, the omnies may not be able to rely on dispatch all the time, but that doesn't mean they can't do a lot of stuff. Remember how they punished that one offend...

Kay, whatever.<P>Anyway, does anyone have a problem with the Namek race? I think it'd be funny to have a fighter race be mistaken for a Nordian. Anyway, maybe not.<P>Online comic? That'd be...woah, my character illustrated on the world of Forbez...<P>And now, on with the story!!!<P>_________________...

Hmm? Oh, it is!<P>Sorry!

Race...are the Nameks allowed? Anyway, I'll try and stay in POV harder. The, "I don't know" remark was intended for me, the writer, not me, the character.

Name: Koji or Kojini Age: 15 Occupation: Would-be aspiring novelist and mudboy Weight: Enough to be a burden Problems: Slightly antisocial and anti-patriotic, no skills in idle conversation, problems with ignorant authority figures, tendency to become extremly violent once every few years. Outside Q...

Yeah, probably.

Hmm, off topic. But about the rights to your comic. Could my school's newspaper do that? As far as money goes, I'm not sure you'd get a dime, but it wouldn't cost anything either. Plus, you'll get more fans to buy more stuff.

Who?

Shame.<P>Agh, that makes two mistakes on the same thread.