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sure thing! i read the comic immediately when it's up anyway.

oh, still gotta take the "a" in front of "gorgeous" out in panel 5.

see ya.

mmh, i like where this is going :shucks: panel 1: "she's getting too close " sounds much more familiar, although i'm not 100% certain you can't use "near" as well. panel 2: "it's not like she is a shark" the if thing is something you'd use in french and german. panel 5: "she has such a gorgeous brea...

heya again,

panel 3: "don't turn your back on your destiny" or "don't turn away from your destiny" perhaps even "don't turn back on your destiny" (i'm not native myself, just spent some time in the States)

greez!

i just love the fith panel

last panel: "might be a good idea" sounds much more natural. but perhaps it's a question of style.

greez!

glad i could help. :) about the belief thing, i was actually thinking you might want to get that point across. but would a total stranger that just wants to get into his pants think about his beliefs, or more about how to get rid of his worries? :wink: but again, since its not a grammar error, you c...

hi sam and kata i've been following your comic since this summer, and well, i just love it. :D finally a comic that is not afraid to treat sex all natural and easy-going - the way it actually is, at least in my world. since i check it quite regularly for updates i also caught up on the translation i...